# Critquing my updated mess **URL:** \ **Category:** design\ **Created:** [August 18, 2006, 4:23pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critquing-my-updated-mess/197732 "2006-08-18T16:23:14Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 1\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![Sifodyas](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/e47774/32.png) [@Sifodyas](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Sifodyas)\ **Post date:** [August 18, 2006, 4:23pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critquing-my-updated-mess/197732/1 "2006-08-18T16:23:14Z")
Ahoy ahoy, [-Site Here-](http://www.birkvideo.com/proof) I made some small changes to a project I have been working on, and was hoping to get some fresh views and critiques (thx for those who posted on my prev. thread). At the moment, I’ve limited things to a home-page (default opener), a services page (was only ever gonna be text 😊), a photo gallery and a contact page (which I finally got working :be:). There will be a video gallery included but I’m just waiting on some content to be delivered. This will be distinct from the photo gallery, a change in navigation and the _shell_, as it were. Unfortunately, I still have not designed an appropriate _corporate logo_ (or should that really read _identity_?) but I’ll probably do this once I get paid and discuss how much extra I’ll charge for the _add ons_ (sodding thing takes a long time - not just the gfx/coding for the site, but the conditions the photos may arrive in ☹ ). Tommorow, I’ll add a _Whats New?_ menu, as its make sense for people wanting to see the fresh stuff only… One of the significant changes that I made was the HTML index which does the flash detection (I remain loyal to flash publishers javascript version). I’ve only had the oppurtunity to test the html side of things on FF and IE, so I’m not entirely sure how other browsers react (old ones can be redirected to my sock drawer). Note the dodgy IE rendered text in the index html, which although renders at the bottom (-2%) of the page, decided it did not want to center itself. IE can go _love_ itself. _Just checked Opera - and it renders fine!_ Anyways, critiques and views are all welcome and taken onboard. Cheers peeps. 🥚