# Crying shame **URL:** \ **Category:** Uncategorized\ **Created:** [August 18, 2003, 11:28pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/crying-shame/28817 "2003-08-18T23:28:25Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 20\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![teed](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/t/9fc348/32.png) [@teed](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/teed)\ **Post date:** [August 18, 2003, 11:28pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/crying-shame/28817/1 "2003-08-18T23:28:25Z")
well i thought i would see what people thought of my latest peice, you are the first to see it other than me so please comments and critics please. 🙂 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 18, 2003, 11:30pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/crying-shame/28817/2 "2003-08-18T23:30:53Z")
theres a bunch of negative space, and i dont really see how the dotted lines fit in, but its pretty good. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 18, 2003, 11:35pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/crying-shame/28817/3 "2003-08-18T23:35:04Z")
The title inspired me so I was hoping for a great picture, but it didn’t really do anything for me… sorry ☹ - Soul :s: ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 18, 2003, 11:36pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/crying-shame/28817/4 "2003-08-18T23:36:44Z")
eugh! the more i look at it now the more i dont like it, at first i liked it but im starting to not like it, anyway thanks for the comments. it looks like its back to the drawing board ☹ ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 19, 2003, 1:20am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/crying-shame/28817/5 "2003-08-19T01:20:12Z")
Call me crazy… I really don’t care !!! I like it ! But some content in there dude!!:beam: \_\_\_\_jMkM:s: ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 19, 2003, 2:47pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/crying-shame/28817/6 "2003-08-19T14:47:11Z")
yeah the neg space kills it. I think it is good ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 19, 2003, 2:58pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/crying-shame/28817/7 "2003-08-19T14:58:22Z")
i dont like teh text. like everyone said it has way to much negitive space. i dont know, the effect on the baby is coool but over all i dont like it. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 20, 2003, 1:36am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/crying-shame/28817/8 "2003-08-20T01:36:54Z")
its nice, bit empty though ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 20, 2003, 11:42pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/crying-shame/28817/9 "2003-08-20T23:42:16Z")
ok i tryed again this time with a different image so hopefully this one is better…:crazy: ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 21, 2003, 12:04am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/crying-shame/28817/10 "2003-08-21T00:04:31Z")
Well you adressed the negative space issue in the second one, and the unbalanced aspect pulls your eyes across the image. But overall I like the other one, the colors and image seemed better to me. You just need to use all the space your working with and add to it. Keep up the good work!🙂 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 21, 2003, 12:06am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/crying-shame/28817/11 "2003-08-21T00:06:46Z")
thanks man for the comments and advice im not sure what to add to the first one though i tried adding more images but it seems to cramped and cluttered but maybe if i crop and re-arrange i could get something better ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 21, 2003, 12:13am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/crying-shame/28817/12 "2003-08-21T00:13:53Z")
Well personally I liked the arrangement of the first version, it just needed more to it. What exactly are you making this for? If it makes sense I would suggest putting in more content or text into that blank area, more if you really want to fill it up and less if you still want to keep it light and airy (which I think would be better). Also see you registered at my boards, thanks! 🙂 Hope to see you around there often!C:-) ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 21, 2003, 12:22am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/crying-shame/28817/13 "2003-08-21T00:22:45Z")
no problem about the boards 😉 anyway i am making this for my personal website which i am currently designing and these peices are to be used in my portfolio i dont really know what to fill the space up with though, i tried images but they didnt fit right so maybe i will try some text but im not sure on what type of text, any ideas ? ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 21, 2003, 12:26am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/crying-shame/28817/14 "2003-08-21T00:26:03Z")
Well considering your using it as your portfolio, I’d suggest using something that would represent you and your style. If your a bold, short and too the point person put a few bold, large words. If your a detailed person then put lots of little words, very descriptive and intricatly placed. Also if you know of any friends from here let them know about our boards as well. :pope: Also can you do me a favor? If you could just change this image down to 50x50 so I can use it as an icon on here please? Thanks ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 21, 2003, 12:29am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/crying-shame/28817/15 "2003-08-21T00:29:45Z")
hmm… i think im more of a bold and to the point person, so i could use some words the cause tears but in n affectionate way to maybe convey love and peace and not so much pain and despair. here is your image you wanted, and yes i will tell my friends about the boards 🙂 :tie: ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 21, 2003, 12:35am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/crying-shame/28817/16 "2003-08-21T00:35:33Z")
Any way to fix the jaggies on it? :pirate: ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 21, 2003, 12:40am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/crying-shame/28817/17 "2003-08-21T00:40:28Z")
isnt that bleutains or whatever’s logo? ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 21, 2003, 12:45am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/crying-shame/28817/18 "2003-08-21T00:45:53Z")
It’s Bleutuna’s “cubestick” that he made originally white, then he also made an orange edition for himself and blue one for me. \<:} ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 21, 2003, 12:54am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/crying-shame/28817/19 "2003-08-21T00:54:21Z")
so you know him? i was just making sure that you werent taking his logo ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 21, 2003, 12:55am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/crying-shame/28817/20 "2003-08-21T00:55:40Z")
Oh no I’ve known Bleu for a couple of years now. He helped design my site, so we’re cool. [Next page](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/crying-shame/28817.md?page=2)