# CV Critique

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/cv-critique/213578>\
**Category:** design\
**Created:** [January 21, 2007, 3:40am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/cv-critique/213578 "2007-01-21T03:40:35Z")\
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**Author:** ![leisuresuitlissy](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/leisuresuitlissy/32/2109_2.png) [@leisuresuitlissy](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/leisuresuitlissy)\
**Post date:** [January 21, 2007, 3:40am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/cv-critique/213578/1 "2007-01-21T03:40:35Z")

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Hiya people, I’ve just overhauled my cv, would you please have a look and tell me what you think?

I am not concerned with the look, I need a critique on the writing. Do I sound clever enough? What kind of job/s do you think that would suit? How much $ do I sound entitled to? I am hoping that it’s broad enough to cover design, client-side development and perhaps project management without making me sound like a master of none. :d:

Oh and don’t worry, it’s going to be hosted properly when it’s finished. Geocities is just for the WIP version.

[http://www.geocities.com/leisuresuitlissy/cv.html](http://www.geocities.com/leisuresuitlissy/cv.html)

Thanks  
Melissa