# Desktop critique **URL:** \ **Category:** Uncategorized\ **Created:** [October 2, 2004, 11:47am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/desktop-critique/66089 "2004-10-02T11:47:46Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 4\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![zacus](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/z/278dde/32.png) [@zacus](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/zacus)\ **Post date:** [October 2, 2004, 11:47am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/desktop-critique/66089/1 "2004-10-02T11:47:46Z")
hey i actually did this a few days ago for that “show us your backgrounds” thread, but seeing as i did it i thought i might post it here, if you can think of any way i can improve it tel me k, :ear: im all ears ![](http://www.geocities.com/waqkum/newestdesktop.jpg)[url=“[http://www.geocities.com/waqkum/newestdesktop.jpg](http://www.geocities.com/waqkum/newestdesktop.jpg)”] critique remembering that this is for nothing in particular but if u think its any good i might put it in my portfolio when its done thanks ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [October 2, 2004, 12:25pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/desktop-critique/66089/2 "2004-10-02T12:25:52Z")
It’s a nice image, but I think you ought to remove the text… Possible write it with a different font, I don’t think that works as it is. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [October 2, 2004, 12:28pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/desktop-critique/66089/3 "2004-10-02T12:28:49Z")
i second that, play around with text positioning and fonts a little more ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [October 2, 2004, 12:44pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/desktop-critique/66089/4 "2004-10-02T12:44:29Z")
k thanks guys