# Early Work In Progress - FeswickProductions
**URL:** https://forum.kirupa.com/t/early-work-in-progress-feswickproductions/117955
**Category:** Uncategorized
**Created:** [August 1, 2004, 11:27am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/early-work-in-progress-feswickproductions/117955 "2004-08-01T11:27:07Z")
**Posts on this page:** 8
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### Author:  [@Gecko](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Gecko)
#### Post date: [August 1, 2004, 11:27am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/early-work-in-progress-feswickproductions/117955/1 "2004-08-01T11:27:07Z")
[Early Work In Progress - FeswickProductions](http://www.g3cko.com/concept.html)
Hi there! This is a work in progress in its early stages, so all that works is the front page, which is reloaded by clicking the logo. This is also my first flash site ever. I just wanted to get some comments and suggestions. Right now i’m planning on having a different background picture for each section. Anyways, any help is appreciated.
😃
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### Author:  [@El\_Thierro](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/El_Thierro)
#### Post date: [August 1, 2004, 11:51am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/early-work-in-progress-feswickproductions/117955/2 "2004-08-01T11:51:23Z")
It looks very nice, especially for a first flash site. Compared to my first flash site, it looks even better :ne:
Nice clean logo, simple buttons and clean frames. I think you’re off to a good start :thumb:
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### Author:  [@sirtimbly](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/sirtimbly)
#### Post date: [August 1, 2004, 6:43pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/early-work-in-progress-feswickproductions/117955/3 "2004-08-01T18:43:02Z")
indeed, for a first site this is pretty dang good. only design suggestion I have is that you may want to move the FeswickProductions logo to the left instead of centered, it might help balance the page more. Otherwise, I’m really impressed.
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### Author:  [@chenu](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/chenu)
#### Post date: [August 1, 2004, 9:16pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/early-work-in-progress-feswickproductions/117955/4 "2004-08-01T21:16:08Z")
Great start. My first site is terrible compared to this.
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### Author:  [@Brian\_Menn](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Brian_Menn)
#### Post date: [August 2, 2004, 2:35pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/early-work-in-progress-feswickproductions/117955/5 "2004-08-02T14:35:30Z")
Very nice. For your first, or 15th, this is a well done site. My only suggestions, tone down the button sound, it’s not bad, but it seems a little… And, change the background color of the HTML page to match the background of the Flash movie. Otherwise, I think it’s well done.
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### Author:  [@Rasta666](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Rasta666)
#### Post date: [August 2, 2004, 4:38pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/early-work-in-progress-feswickproductions/117955/6 "2004-08-02T16:38:12Z")
i think this is amazing for a first site, i think to logo is fine where it is ( no offence tim)
great job mate
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### Author:  [@themachine37](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/themachine37)
#### Post date: [August 2, 2004, 4:44pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/early-work-in-progress-feswickproductions/117955/7 "2004-08-02T16:44:49Z")
yeah tone down those sounds. here is a tip for ya: sounds can ruin a website, people get annoyed easily by audio and have a tendency to close sites that bother them.
i would try to make to movie flow into the html a little better though too, maybe center the movie and give the page a background color
other than that it looks great!
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### Author:  [@Gecko](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Gecko)
#### Post date: [August 2, 2004, 5:19pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/early-work-in-progress-feswickproductions/117955/8 "2004-08-02T17:19:22Z")
thanks for all the comments everyone! Yeah, i’ll tryout some different rollover sounds. And when its done I plan to make the html fit it. I’ll post when I have made more progress.