# Early Work In Progress - FeswickProductions **URL:** \ **Category:** design\ **Created:** [August 1, 2004, 11:27am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/early-work-in-progress-feswickproductions/59499 "2004-08-01T11:27:07Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 8\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![Gecko](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/g/c4cdca/32.png) [@Gecko](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Gecko)\ **Post date:** [August 1, 2004, 11:27am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/early-work-in-progress-feswickproductions/59499/1 "2004-08-01T11:27:07Z")
[Early Work In Progress - FeswickProductions](http://www.g3cko.com/concept.html) Hi there! This is a work in progress in its early stages, so all that works is the front page, which is reloaded by clicking the logo. This is also my first flash site ever. I just wanted to get some comments and suggestions. Right now i’m planning on having a different background picture for each section. Anyways, any help is appreciated. 😃 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 1, 2004, 11:51am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/early-work-in-progress-feswickproductions/59499/2 "2004-08-01T11:51:23Z")
It looks very nice, especially for a first flash site. Compared to my first flash site, it looks even better :ne: Nice clean logo, simple buttons and clean frames. I think you’re off to a good start :thumb: ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 1, 2004, 6:43pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/early-work-in-progress-feswickproductions/59499/3 "2004-08-01T18:43:02Z")
indeed, for a first site this is pretty dang good. only design suggestion I have is that you may want to move the FeswickProductions logo to the left instead of centered, it might help balance the page more. Otherwise, I’m really impressed. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 1, 2004, 9:16pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/early-work-in-progress-feswickproductions/59499/4 "2004-08-01T21:16:08Z")
Great start. My first site is terrible compared to this. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 2, 2004, 2:35pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/early-work-in-progress-feswickproductions/59499/5 "2004-08-02T14:35:30Z")
Very nice. For your first, or 15th, this is a well done site. My only suggestions, tone down the button sound, it’s not bad, but it seems a little… And, change the background color of the HTML page to match the background of the Flash movie. Otherwise, I think it’s well done. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 2, 2004, 4:38pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/early-work-in-progress-feswickproductions/59499/6 "2004-08-02T16:38:12Z")
i think this is amazing for a first site, i think to logo is fine where it is ( no offence tim) great job mate ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 2, 2004, 4:44pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/early-work-in-progress-feswickproductions/59499/7 "2004-08-02T16:44:49Z")
yeah tone down those sounds. here is a tip for ya: sounds can ruin a website, people get annoyed easily by audio and have a tendency to close sites that bother them. i would try to make to movie flow into the html a little better though too, maybe center the movie and give the page a background color other than that it looks great! ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 2, 2004, 5:19pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/early-work-in-progress-feswickproductions/59499/8 "2004-08-02T17:19:22Z")
thanks for all the comments everyone! Yeah, i’ll tryout some different rollover sounds. And when its done I plan to make the html fit it. I’ll post when I have made more progress.