# First major Flash project

**URL:** https://forum.kirupa.com/t/first-major-flash-project/248103
**Category:** design
**Created:** [January 3, 2008, 9:41pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/first-major-flash-project/248103 "2008-01-03T21:41:48Z")
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### Author: ![monkeydoc](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/m/919ad9/32.png) [@monkeydoc](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/monkeydoc)
#### Post date: [January 3, 2008, 9:41pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/first-major-flash-project/248103/1 "2008-01-03T21:41:48Z")

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Hey, looking for some critiques of the following:  
[http://www.arkansas.gov/dhs/oas/jobs/index.html](http://www.arkansas.gov/dhs/oas/jobs/index.html)

Today is actually my last day at this job, so I won’t be able to make any changes, but I’m interested in hearing criticism. There are a couple things (the lens flare thingy and the weird cloud-meteors) that shouldn’t be there, but I was experimenting and my boss (oddly) liked them.

I’m a total amateur, so it’s probably a pretty big target. I’m mostly looking for pointers on design. I tend to have a lot of trouble making things look interesting without making them look tacky.