# First published web game - please comment

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/first-published-web-game-please-comment/160974>\
**Category:** design\
**Created:** [August 31, 2005, 1:47am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/first-published-web-game-please-comment/160974 "2005-08-31T01:47:56Z")\
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**Author:** ![Lomadrian](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/l/9de0a6/32.png) [@Lomadrian](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Lomadrian)\
**Post date:** [August 31, 2005, 1:47am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/first-published-web-game-please-comment/160974/1 "2005-08-31T01:47:56Z")

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I’m 15 years old and have been working with Flash for just over a year, and I just recently sent in my first completed game to gotoAndPlay() called “Stop”, and I’d like some extra feedback on it.

It’s a puzzle game where you’re trying to stop your friend from committing suicide.

You can find the game [here](http://www.gotoandplay.it/_games/playGame.php?g=141).

P.S. I just realized after they posted it on the site that the sixth level is almost impossible to beat (I did it, but just barely, and I’m the one who made the game). I sent in the corrected level data, so if you’re getting really frustrated at it, the corrected level should show up on the site hopefully sometime soon.