# First try at a cinematic intro...whats good, whats bad

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**Created:** [April 16, 2005, 11:39pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/first-try-at-a-cinematic-intro-whats-good-whats-bad/86936 "2005-04-16T23:39:14Z")\
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**Author:** ![Machuse](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/m/f4b2a3/32.png) [@Machuse](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Machuse)\
**Post date:** [April 16, 2005, 11:39pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/first-try-at-a-cinematic-intro-whats-good-whats-bad/86936/1 "2005-04-16T23:39:14Z")

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[www.seniorweek05.com](http://www.seniorweek05.com)  
Its an intro for senior week at my college. Its a huge event every year and contails all types of parties at the end of the year, after school is out and before graduation.

Any advice, I really want to make this the best it can be.