# First vector try **URL:** \ **Category:** Uncategorized\ **Created:** [March 23, 2006, 10:20pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/first-vector-try/183114 "2006-03-23T22:20:25Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 15\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![SessionDesign](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/sessiondesign/32/1887_2.png) [@SessionDesign](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/SessionDesign)\ **Post date:** [March 23, 2006, 10:20pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/first-vector-try/183114/1 "2006-03-23T22:20:25Z")
What do u think of this? It’s the first time i’ve tried to do vector, so be gentle… 😊 Oh, and tips to improve are welcome 😃 ---
**Author:** ![ApixDesigns](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/a/a88e57/32.png) [@ApixDesigns](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/ApixDesigns)\ **Post date:** [March 23, 2006, 10:23pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/first-vector-try/183114/2 "2006-03-23T22:23:03Z")
looks alright, i like the city/clouds thingy. not too keen on the font, mabye try changing it and change the colours in the BG to something a little more flashy(not so dull) but keep them green ---
**Author:** ![dreeft](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/d/5f9b8f/32.png) [@dreeft](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/dreeft)\ **Post date:** [March 23, 2006, 11:09pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/first-vector-try/183114/3 "2006-03-23T23:09:49Z")
I dig it. However, I agree with Apix that the font is not too flattering. I would suggest extending the cityscape up further (or floating), to make it the major element, add more buildings/road as necessary and perhaps add the text into the design (make it less prominent). ---
**Author:** ![SessionDesign](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/sessiondesign/32/1887_2.png) [@SessionDesign](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/SessionDesign)\ **Post date:** [March 24, 2006, 2:22pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/first-vector-try/183114/4 "2006-03-24T14:22:40Z")
Thanks for the comments. I’ll make a some changes and post it later 😉 ---
**Author:** ![SPAD3S](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/a88e4f/32.png) [@SPAD3S](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/SPAD3S)\ **Post date:** [March 24, 2006, 5:17pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/first-vector-try/183114/5 "2006-03-24T17:17:19Z")
Hafor a first try its awesome. The fonts ok i think could be bigger tho to take up [space.com](http://space.com) ---
**Author:** ![prozacn](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/p/e95f7d/32.png) [@prozacn](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/prozacn)\ **Post date:** [March 24, 2006, 11:16pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/first-vector-try/183114/6 "2006-03-24T23:16:20Z")
kinda reminds me of fasterthanlights style just a hell of a lot simpler but it looks cool enough i guess - not a great fan of the grey at the top. a funky fade type thing with the green may have looked cool but thats just me ---
**Author:** ![hybrid101](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/h/7993a0/32.png) [@hybrid101](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/hybrid101)\ **Post date:** [March 25, 2006, 6:20am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/first-vector-try/183114/7 "2006-03-25T06:20:04Z")
faster’s style on text:) i like the gradients and the overall feel:) grat job ---
**Author:** ![SessionDesign](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/sessiondesign/32/1887_2.png) [@SessionDesign](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/SessionDesign)\ **Post date:** [March 25, 2006, 9:11am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/first-vector-try/183114/8 "2006-03-25T09:11:51Z")
Wow, thx! It’s truly an honor to be compared with fasterthanlight! His work is really amazing! But i still got some learning to do though… :sigh: ---
**Author:** ![anon1712571](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/a/9dc877/32.png) [@anon1712571](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/anon1712571)\ **Post date:** [March 25, 2006, 9:39am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/first-vector-try/183114/9 "2006-03-25T09:39:55Z")
not bad- there is not much going on though 😛 hehe good effort ---
**Author:** ![TheCanadian](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/t/67e7ee/32.png) [@TheCanadian](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/TheCanadian)\ **Post date:** [March 25, 2006, 9:46am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/first-vector-try/183114/10 "2006-03-25T09:46:33Z")
I think the background stripes need to come out at more of an angle, and since that probably makes no sense I’ll give you an example which demonstrates my bitmap tracing and stripe drawing skills 🙂 ![](http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/65/v5sv.jpg) Other than that it looks great to me :thumb: [URL=“[http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/65/v5sv.jpg](http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/65/v5sv.jpg)”] ---
**Author:** ![firethrottle](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/firethrottle/32/2296_2.png) [@firethrottle](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/firethrottle)\ **Post date:** [March 25, 2006, 10:15am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/first-vector-try/183114/11 "2006-03-25T10:15:05Z")
i like it. the colours are great, and the font isn’t that bad at all. however, i would change the black at the top to white. ---
**Author:** ![usagi](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/u/b5ac83/32.png) [@usagi](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/usagi)\ **Post date:** [March 25, 2006, 1:49pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/first-vector-try/183114/12 "2006-03-25T13:49:21Z")
i love it, the font needs a bit of touching up, or try adding the buildings a bit over the clouds, or just so it seems that they are a bit behind them, good job… ---
**Author:** ![SessionDesign](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/sessiondesign/32/1887_2.png) [@SessionDesign](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/SessionDesign)\ **Post date:** [March 25, 2006, 6:25pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/first-vector-try/183114/13 "2006-03-25T18:25:57Z")
Couldn’t help myself, so i made another one… 😃 Like it? Gotta admit that this was fun… (-: Thanx for all the comments, they inspired me to continue! :thumb: …but finding fonts that works well with various designs is hard… ---
**Author:** ![Absent](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/a/45deac/32.png) [@Absent](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Absent)\ **Post date:** [March 25, 2006, 6:32pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/first-vector-try/183114/14 "2006-03-25T18:32:37Z")
Impressive but those leaves looks somewhat out of place. ---
**Author:** ![SessionDesign](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/sessiondesign/32/1887_2.png) [@SessionDesign](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/SessionDesign)\ **Post date:** [March 25, 2006, 6:36pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/first-vector-try/183114/15 "2006-03-25T18:36:39Z")
Yeah… you’re right about the leaves, maybe i should take 'em out… 😟