# Flash Intro Check Please

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/flash-intro-check-please/83161>\
**Category:** design\
**Created:** [March 16, 2005, 4:43pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/flash-intro-check-please/83161 "2005-03-16T16:43:34Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 1\
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**Author:** ![Seb\_Hughes](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/839c29/32.png) [@Seb\_Hughes](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Seb_Hughes)\
**Post date:** [March 16, 2005, 4:43pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/flash-intro-check-please/83161/1 "2005-03-16T16:43:34Z")

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Please tell me what you think of this intro and tell me how to make it better thanks