# Flyer Review please! **URL:** \ **Category:** design\ **Created:** [July 19, 2004, 7:05pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/flyer-review-please/58095 "2004-07-19T19:05:40Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 20\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![berkoWitZ](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/b/b9bd4f/32.png) [@berkoWitZ](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/berkoWitZ)\ **Post date:** [July 19, 2004, 7:05pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/flyer-review-please/58095/1 "2004-07-19T19:05:40Z")
hello! I just finished this flyer of my company 🙂 what do u think??? Its going to be shown in a mall so I need good feedback please, what do u like, what do u hate, C&C 🙂 if u want to see the in better resolution [go here.](http://www.framecreation.com/demo1.jpg) I still have to add some text, my phone number, email, etc…maybe that type of pic is overused but I still love it :love: Thanks! 🍺 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 19, 2004, 8:57pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/flyer-review-please/58095/2 "2004-07-19T20:57:53Z")
I love it! It certainly catches my eye! the colors & locations of [frameCreation.com](http://frameCreation.com) make it hard to read. But just that text, the text in the flower and the white text at the bottom read wondefully. Perhaps just play with the color, a border or something for the text. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 19, 2004, 11:03pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/flyer-review-please/58095/3 "2004-07-19T23:03:39Z")
thanks man, glad someone like it 😛 I need for feedback! thanks! 🙂 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 19, 2004, 11:05pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/flyer-review-please/58095/4 "2004-07-19T23:05:08Z")
😃 Bing! Maybe the words “Frame Creation” could be moved down a little? ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 19, 2004, 11:09pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/flyer-review-please/58095/5 "2004-07-19T23:09:24Z")
I really like it but I think that the orange doesn’t really fit onto the yellow flower background, sorta opposing colors ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 19, 2004, 11:10pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/flyer-review-please/58095/6 "2004-07-19T23:10:22Z")
i think that the f in frame creation should be capitalized, and the entire phraze should be moved a bit, as it doesn’t seem to sit well, over the edge of the flower pedals. Maybe if you made it bigger, and added a soft Drop Shadow/OuterGlow, it might look a little better… everything else looks good to me… ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 20, 2004, 12:07am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/flyer-review-please/58095/7 "2004-07-20T00:07:16Z")
yes the word framecreation is a little hard to read, I´ll change that, about making the f capitalized I cant, its part of the logo of the company (I`ll have to convince my brother :P) but thanks for telling me, I´ll play with some colors and change the orange ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 20, 2004, 12:11am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/flyer-review-please/58095/8 "2004-07-20T00:11:34Z")
the frameCreation on the bottom-left corner needs to stand out more :mu: ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 20, 2004, 4:15pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/flyer-review-please/58095/9 "2004-07-20T16:15:43Z")
ur right color, the bottom-left framecreation needs to stand out more, I´ll make the changes ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 20, 2004, 5:00pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/flyer-review-please/58095/10 "2004-07-20T17:00:21Z")
It looks good, but be careful not to overcram the page with text (if you are adding your email etc onto it)! ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 20, 2004, 5:01pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/flyer-review-please/58095/11 "2004-07-20T17:01:40Z")
yeah, hes right…it would be too overwhelming with lots of text…keep it simple :mu: ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 20, 2004, 5:03pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/flyer-review-please/58095/12 "2004-07-20T17:03:55Z")
yes I was thinking the same but I dont know…u guys think I need to add my email, phone number and all that stuff in a flyer??? Its a must or not? ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 20, 2004, 5:04pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/flyer-review-please/58095/13 "2004-07-20T17:04:59Z")
I wouldn’t bother - as long as the information is available at [framecreation.com](http://framecreation.com) ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 20, 2004, 5:31pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/flyer-review-please/58095/14 "2004-07-20T17:31:31Z")
yes the info is available at the site, I´ll keep it simple then 🙂 take a look, I add a small drop shadow to the framecreation at the top, is more visible now, and changed the color of the framecreation at the bottom, more visible now too 🙂 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 20, 2004, 5:33pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/flyer-review-please/58095/15 "2004-07-20T17:33:14Z")
Only if I could read spanish 🅰. :run: _Opens Dicionario_ Is that how you spell it :P? Anyways the colors are great. That yellow always catches my eyes ;). ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 20, 2004, 5:34pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/flyer-review-please/58095/16 "2004-07-20T17:34:06Z")
much better… good job! ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 20, 2004, 5:36pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/flyer-review-please/58095/17 "2004-07-20T17:36:22Z")
lol, close shaf…it´s “diccionario” 😉 thanks Majeye… yep i think it looks better but still I think I could make it look better but I dont know what else to do :puzzled: ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 20, 2004, 5:59pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/flyer-review-please/58095/18 "2004-07-20T17:59:07Z")
I dig! Personally though, I’d probobly break up the color of the logo so it’s a bit more clear… like this: frame[COLOR=“red”]Creation[/COLOR].com (just different colors) edit: thanks Reefster. :hangover: ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 20, 2004, 6:03pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/flyer-review-please/58095/19 "2004-07-20T18:03:18Z")
Theres no s in it ;). ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 20, 2004, 6:06pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/flyer-review-please/58095/20 "2004-07-20T18:06:07Z")
that not a bad idea disco, I´ll try, thanks; and yes, there´s no s in there 😛 [Next page](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/flyer-review-please/58095.md?page=2)