# Flyer Review please!

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/flyer-review-please/58095>\
**Category:** design\
**Created:** [July 19, 2004, 7:05pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/flyer-review-please/58095 "2004-07-19T19:05:40Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 4\
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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [July 20, 2004, 8:53pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/flyer-review-please/58095/21 "2004-07-20T20:53:21Z")

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Sweat! catches ones eyes!

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [July 20, 2004, 9:11pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/flyer-review-please/58095/22 "2004-07-20T21:11:17Z")

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> [@keeeka](#):
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> Sweat! catches ones eyes!

I’ve had sweat drop from my head and arms and such but never catches my eye…too small.

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [July 20, 2004, 9:18pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/flyer-review-please/58095/23 "2004-07-20T21:18:58Z")

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It looks really nice, the second one 😉

Don’t know what else to do with it, but if you have the “something’s missing” feeling, then keep asking for feedback. I know that feeling, and it’s not nice.

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [July 20, 2004, 10:54pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/flyer-review-please/58095/24 "2004-07-20T22:54:44Z")

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yes its weird, still needs something ☹ but its coming along fine I think 🙂

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