# Flyer Review

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/flyer-review/56473>\
**Category:** design\
**Created:** [July 4, 2004, 7:39pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/flyer-review/56473 "2004-07-04T19:39:58Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 6\
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**Author:** ![damg](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/d/d26b3c/32.png) [@damg](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/damg)\
**Post date:** [July 4, 2004, 7:39pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/flyer-review/56473/1 "2004-07-04T19:39:58Z")

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Hey everyone, this is a flyer I made in photoshop. Please critique 🙂

[flyer](http://www.damgproductions.com/test/flyer/flyerFinal-web.jpg)

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [July 7, 2004, 2:40am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/flyer-review/56473/2 "2004-07-07T02:40:27Z")

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1.your name/logo needs to stand out more…  
2.slogan is probably required for a flyer like this…  
3.main content is to close to the edge

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [July 7, 2004, 2:47am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/flyer-review/56473/3 "2004-07-07T02:47:56Z")

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First the goal of a flyer is to grab their attention… yours didn’t do that.

It confused me. What text do I look at first? It’s hard to read because of the busy background. And it isn’t ordered.

my 2 cents.

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [July 7, 2004, 3:29am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/flyer-review/56473/4 "2004-07-07T03:29:06Z")

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maybe a different composition of your type and all things general i guess…

:panda:E!kO:panda:

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [July 7, 2004, 4:29am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/flyer-review/56473/5 "2004-07-07T04:29:29Z")

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Its way to busy - between the photo in the background, to the code in the background, then text, drop shaddow ect, i couldnt tell where to focus my attention to.

You need a simple one colour background with an eye catchy logo and an eye catch font that will keep the reader reading.

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [July 9, 2004, 9:07am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/flyer-review/56473/6 "2004-07-09T09:07:57Z")

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Way too much text,

you should make an image that catch the eye on the flyer … and maybe on the other side, you can have some explanation (text).