# Gangsta for Beginners

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/gangsta-for-beginners/186460>\
**Category:** contests\
**Created:** [April 21, 2006, 11:54am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/gangsta-for-beginners/186460 "2006-04-21T11:54:08Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 4\
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**Author:** ![Skunkycomics](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/43a26b/32.png) [@Skunkycomics](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Skunkycomics)\
**Post date:** [April 21, 2006, 11:54am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/gangsta-for-beginners/186460/1 "2006-04-21T11:54:08Z")

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Hey everyone, here’s my attempt - hope you like it! :crazy:  
 ![](http://www.skunkycomics.com/MBgangsta.jpg)

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**Author:** ![SlowRoasted](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/a698b9/32.png) [@SlowRoasted](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/SlowRoasted)\
**Post date:** [April 23, 2006, 1:28am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/gangsta-for-beginners/186460/2 "2006-04-23T01:28:12Z")

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I like the title text. You seem to have the look and feel going okay but the art on the main guy is really messy and takes away from the overall design.

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**Author:** ![anon1712571](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/a/9dc877/32.png) [@anon1712571](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/anon1712571)\
**Post date:** [April 23, 2006, 1:41am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/gangsta-for-beginners/186460/3 "2006-04-23T01:41:17Z")

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Not diggin the rest of the fonts- and like SlowRoasted said - the character looks really messy. Clean him up with some bold flowing linework 🙂

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**Author:** ![Skunkycomics](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/43a26b/32.png) [@Skunkycomics](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Skunkycomics)\
**Post date:** [April 23, 2006, 7:20am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/gangsta-for-beginners/186460/4 "2006-04-23T07:20:43Z")

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thanks peeps for the feedback, its an attempt - shall post up another version soon…ish 😉