# Hawk design // v1 // freedom **URL:** \ **Category:** Uncategorized\ **Created:** [April 7, 2003, 3:41am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/hawk-design-v1-freedom/17572 "2003-04-07T03:41:28Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 10\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![Hawk](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/h/22d042/32.png) [@Hawk](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Hawk)\ **Post date:** [April 7, 2003, 3:41am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/hawk-design-v1-freedom/17572/1 "2003-04-07T03:41:28Z")
[http://jellomirage.tripod.com/index\_hawk.html](http://jellomirage.tripod.com/index_hawk.html) peace hawk-freedom ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [April 7, 2003, 4:12am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/hawk-design-v1-freedom/17572/2 "2003-04-07T04:12:48Z")
did you want some feedback on that little intro? :-\ I don’t think it’s loading the rest of the site after the intro, maybe it’s just me… ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [April 7, 2003, 7:16am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/hawk-design-v1-freedom/17572/3 "2003-04-07T07:16:28Z")
ahh yes, i forgot to explain sry… all this is so far is the intro lol i would expect that to confuse some people seeing that they didnt know… and yea, if you wanna comment that would be cool hawk-freedom ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [April 7, 2003, 8:50am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/hawk-design-v1-freedom/17572/4 "2003-04-07T08:50:00Z")
Nice so far 🙂 - Soul :s: ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [April 7, 2003, 5:57pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/hawk-design-v1-freedom/17572/5 "2003-04-07T17:57:34Z")
There’s not much to critique on, but it looks good =) ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [April 7, 2003, 6:10pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/hawk-design-v1-freedom/17572/6 "2003-04-07T18:10:24Z")
one thing though! The big blue text is selectable! maybe it’d be better if it was just a graphic! ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [April 7, 2003, 8:31pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/hawk-design-v1-freedom/17572/7 "2003-04-07T20:31:38Z")
wow dude so far so good! and yeah syko i noticed that too. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [April 7, 2003, 8:37pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/hawk-design-v1-freedom/17572/8 "2003-04-07T20:37:41Z")
pretty cool the beginning horizontal line threw me off though…didn’t know the movie extended that far…also the hesitation before it flies off of the screen…is a little jerky…i see the effect…but its a little too jerky… i like the colors and the shapes a lot. perhaps if the background color was different? good work. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [April 7, 2003, 9:10pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/hawk-design-v1-freedom/17572/9 "2003-04-07T21:10:53Z")
Yeah that is really jerky…i think a higher fram rate would do it… ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [April 7, 2003, 9:25pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/hawk-design-v1-freedom/17572/10 "2003-04-07T21:25:34Z")
yep, looks good so far, as i say on almost everyones thing i see (maybe im mentally slow or something) it could use a touch higher frame rate to speed things up a bit.