# Health spa logo

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/health-spa-logo/48817>\
**Category:** design\
**Created:** [April 17, 2004, 1:16am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/health-spa-logo/48817 "2004-04-17T01:16:09Z")\
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**Author:** ![iLikePie](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/i/85f322/32.png) [@iLikePie](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/iLikePie)\
**Post date:** [April 17, 2004, 1:16am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/health-spa-logo/48817/1 "2004-04-17T01:16:09Z")

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hi,

this is a logo i’ve developed for a day spa… aiming to convey peacefulness, relaxation, nature, etc.

there’s a few things i’m worried about for it, so comments would be great.

1. The font i used: I think it looks quite neat, but i’m just worried that it will be a bit too corporate, perhaps not creating the desired feel. But, i was thinking about other possibilities, and i think a more ‘organic’ font might look too sloppy or something.

2. it feels a bit long - the logo with all the text underneath ends up being quite a long block… hope people understand what i mean. I was thinking of perhaps putting the text a bit higher, even overlapping it with the stem of the leaf.

3. also with the text… i wanted it to be an even block, so i had to make the word “glen” bigger so they’d all be even width. Is there any way i can make them aligned without placing emphasis on the word?

C & C welcome, thanks 🙂  
Stu