# Hoax emails, bad grammar

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/hoax-emails-bad-grammar/203744>\
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**Created:** [October 13, 2006, 5:02pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/hoax-emails-bad-grammar/203744 "2006-10-13T17:02:57Z")\
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**Author:** ![fabiopb](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/fabiopb/32/1886_2.png) [@fabiopb](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/fabiopb)\
**Post date:** [October 13, 2006, 5:02pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/hoax-emails-bad-grammar/203744/1 "2006-10-13T17:02:57Z")

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for those living in australia, you will know this bank. note the grammar. i made **[COLOR=Red]bold red[/COLOR]** corrections below…

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[FONT=Verdana][SIZE=2] **UNAUTHORIZED ACCOUNT ACCESS** [/SIZE][/FONT]  
[LEFT][FONT=Verdana][SIZE=2]Our records indicate that you recently added or made a change to one of your email address(es) and Bell Potter was added to your BPAY payment for \*\*[COLOR=Red]a [/COLOR]**new payment from another IP address which is different from your personal IP address.[/SIZE][/FONT][/LEFT]  
[FONT=Verdana][SIZE=2]As part of our security measures,**[COLOR=Red][space here][/COLOR]\*\*we have**[COLOR=Red]t[/COLOR][COLOR=Red]o [/COLOR]terminate[COLOR=Red]d[/COLOR] **** [COLOR=Red][one or the other][/COLOR] **your online banking account untill** [COLOR=Red][no double ‘l’ in “until”][/COLOR] **when** [COLOR=Red][is when necessary here?][/COLOR]** you will restore the access because of the \*\*[COLOR=Red]un[/COLOR]\*\*authorized changes.  
[/SIZE][/FONT]  
[FONT=Verdana][SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana][SIZE=2]Kindly use the link below to restore account access with Commonwealth bank,  
Please click here:  
[/SIZE][/FONT][[FONT=Verdana][SIZE=2][COLOR=#003399]https://www3.netbank.commbank.com.au/netbank/bankmain [/COLOR][/SIZE][/FONT]](http://javascript%3Cb%3E%3C/b%3E:ol%28%27http://www.thoroughbredmemorabilia.com/themes/NetBank/LogOn.htm%27%29;)[/SIZE][/FONT]  
[FONT=Verdana][SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana][SIZE=2]Thank You.[/SIZE][/FONT][/SIZE][/FONT]  
[FONT=Verdana][SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana][SIZE=1]Accounts Management As outlined in our User Agreement, Commonwealth Bank of Australia ® will  
periodically send you information about site changes and enhancements. [/SIZE][/FONT][/SIZE][/FONT]  
[FONT=Verdana][SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana][SIZE=1]Visit our Privacy Policy and User Agreement if you have any questions.  
[/SIZE][/FONT][[FONT=Verdana][SIZE=1][COLOR=#003399] http://www.commbank.com.au/SecurityandPrivacy/default.asp[/COLOR][/SIZE][/FONT]](http://javascript%3Cb%3E%3C/b%3E:ol%28%27http://www.commbank.com.au/SecurityandPrivacy/default.asp%27%29;)[/SIZE][/FONT]