# How can i improve this

**URL:** https://forum.kirupa.com/t/how-can-i-improve-this/313962
**Category:** Uncategorized
**Created:** [September 14, 2010, 10:00pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/how-can-i-improve-this/313962 "2010-09-14T22:00:57Z")
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### Author: ![surf](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/77aa72/32.png) [@surf](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/surf)
#### Post date: [September 14, 2010, 10:00pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/how-can-i-improve-this/313962/1 "2010-09-14T22:00:57Z")

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hey any critiques will be help ful  
[http://tinyurl.com/2dch7fc](http://tinyurl.com/2dch7fc)