# Human Potrait **URL:** \ **Category:** design\ **Created:** [April 4, 2003, 1:02pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/human-potrait/17377 "2003-04-04T13:02:13Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 9\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![silverType](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/ac91a4/32.png) [@silverType](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/silverType)\ **Post date:** [April 4, 2003, 1:02pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/human-potrait/17377/1 "2003-04-04T13:02:13Z")
Hi guys, here’s my second attempt on human potrait. Any constructive comments and criticisms are welcome. 🙂 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [April 4, 2003, 5:47pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/human-potrait/17377/2 "2003-04-04T17:47:57Z")
dammm! Another piece of art! Nice pic man! ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [April 4, 2003, 6:49pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/human-potrait/17377/3 "2003-04-04T18:49:24Z")
It’s a little too smudgy in some parts. Like the eyes. Make them more solid and well defined. Especially that little shine in the eyes - don’t blur it… looks like he’s got cataract. Other than that, I think it’s a great portrait. Well proportioned and you have an interesting style. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [April 4, 2003, 8:42pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/human-potrait/17377/4 "2003-04-04T20:42:52Z")
very nice, althought to colours are a bit to…bright, ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [April 5, 2003, 1:03am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/human-potrait/17377/5 "2003-04-05T01:03:39Z")
Thanks for all your complements. Glad that you guys like it. Btw Rengirl, I kind of get your point for the eyes. 🙂 Besides the eyes, which other parts do you find too smudgy as well? ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [April 5, 2003, 10:54am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/human-potrait/17377/6 "2003-04-05T10:54:09Z")
It looks very nice. May be u can change colour of the hair and brows. Otherwise it is perfect. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [April 5, 2003, 11:04am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/human-potrait/17377/7 "2003-04-05T11:04:17Z")
Erm…The person that I’ve drawn here is an asian with black hair and black eyebrows. The colour that I use for his hair and eyebrows is the darkest colour I can get. Maybe you can give me some suggestions on the colours that I can use for his hair or eyebrows. 🙂 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [April 5, 2003, 11:17am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/human-potrait/17377/8 "2003-04-05T11:17:30Z")
The hair and brows doesn’t look black. It looks Purple colour. The Shirt, Hair and Brows are in the same colour. Maybe u can change the shirt colour! ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [April 5, 2003, 12:00pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/human-potrait/17377/9 "2003-04-05T12:00:36Z")
I have to agree with you that the shirt is purple and the hair and the eyebrows may not be black. But still, I don’t see that the hair and eyebrows could be purple in any ways. Perhaps it’s just me. But anyway, I will still take in your advice and change the colour for the shirt. Thanks for your comments.