# I'm 16 and new to Flash, could someone critique my portfolio?

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**Created:** [June 11, 2005, 5:33pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/im-16-and-new-to-flash-could-someone-critique-my-portfolio/150914 "2005-06-11T17:33:14Z")\
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**Post date:** [June 11, 2005, 5:33pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/im-16-and-new-to-flash-could-someone-critique-my-portfolio/150914/1 "2005-06-11T17:33:14Z")

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Hello everyone, I am a 16 year old guy in the middle if a small town. I have noone to talk to about websites, design, etc. I would really appreciate it if someone, ANYONE would review and critique my Flash portfolio.

This is my first ever Flash website, and the first time using advanced actionscript. So, if anyone out there has some freetime, could you PLEASE give me some constructive critisism on my website?

URL: [url=“[http://www.rawsonreload.com](http://www.rawsonreload.com)”][www.RawsonReload.com](http://www.RawsonReload.com)

Thanks again,

~Philip