# I'm on a roll here

**URL:** https://forum.kirupa.com/t/im-on-a-roll-here/22715
**Category:** Uncategorized
**Created:** [June 7, 2003, 3:45pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/im-on-a-roll-here/22715 "2003-06-07T15:45:08Z")
**Posts on this page:** 6
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### Author: ![LilleMartin](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/l/e9c0ed/32.png) [@LilleMartin](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/LilleMartin)
#### Post date: [June 7, 2003, 3:45pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/im-on-a-roll-here/22715/1 "2003-06-07T15:45:08Z")

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At least what concerns quantity. 🙂

![](http://www.martinjacobsen.no/grafikk/dameMedFeWeb.gif)

I’m still not happy about the shading, and I suck at hair, but I’m getting closer. 🙂

Tips, pointers, criticism, shameless praise, flaming… Bring it on.

-M

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### Author: ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [June 7, 2003, 4:02pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/im-on-a-roll-here/22715/2 "2003-06-07T16:02:34Z")

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i couldnt look at the last one, but i like this one!

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### Author: ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [June 7, 2003, 5:07pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/im-on-a-roll-here/22715/3 "2003-06-07T17:07:05Z")

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Try adding some shadows to the little one! Nice work!

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### Author: ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [June 7, 2003, 5:13pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/im-on-a-roll-here/22715/4 "2003-06-07T17:13:10Z")

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Nice work 🙂 Maybe you could position the eyeball a little bit more to the center of the right eye, and make the bra a bit wider. Add some shadow to the little one indeed. Good work ! 🙂

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### Author: ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [June 7, 2003, 7:18pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/im-on-a-roll-here/22715/5 "2003-06-07T19:18:54Z")

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Oh I like this one a lot more than the first. Nice perspective shot on this one, great job. =)

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### Author: ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [June 7, 2003, 7:49pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/im-on-a-roll-here/22715/6 "2003-06-07T19:49:16Z")

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Thanks for your comments guys.  
I did have a transparent shadow on the little elfling, but somehow it disapeared when I saved as a gif from Illustrator.

(I presume you are talking about the fact that the little woman isn’t casting any shadow in the girls hand…)

Anyway, I’m having a lot of fun with this stuff, so hopefully I’ll improve my skills before I find a new craze. 🙂

-M