# Its not done, but open to suggestions!

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/its-not-done-but-open-to-suggestions/58068>\
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**Created:** [July 19, 2004, 3:46pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/its-not-done-but-open-to-suggestions/58068 "2004-07-19T15:46:10Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 11\
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**Author:** ![color\_loser\_pup](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/c/4af34b/32.png) [@color\_loser\_pup](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/color_loser_pup)\
**Post date:** [July 19, 2004, 3:46pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/its-not-done-but-open-to-suggestions/58068/1 "2004-07-19T15:46:10Z")

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[[color=blue] **click** [/color]](http://wastedmux.babolohost.com/real_site.html)

i made that yesterday. does it remind you of

[[color=blue]this?[/color]](http://www.ferryhalim.com/index2.htm)

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [July 19, 2004, 3:51pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/its-not-done-but-open-to-suggestions/58068/2 "2004-07-19T15:51:58Z")

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Yes, it does remind me of “this?”.

IMO the opening animation is weak, the H thingy w/e it is, that has welcome in the middle doesn’t make to much sense. Welcome is also to close to the borders of the middle part of that H which makes it look worse.

I think only your profile works, and when it loaded I saw some kind of funky shape tween… what was it? How is it relevant to the site?

Keep on truckin

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [July 19, 2004, 3:53pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/its-not-done-but-open-to-suggestions/58068/3 "2004-07-19T15:53:52Z")

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yeah, i didnt finish it yet. i just wanted to see what to fix up before continuing it.

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [July 19, 2004, 3:58pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/its-not-done-but-open-to-suggestions/58068/4 "2004-07-19T15:58:07Z")

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Yea I agree with simplistik.

No offense, but I just sometimes can’t stand animations that take that long to say welcome.

Only the navbar sort of resembles.

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [July 19, 2004, 4:00pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/its-not-done-but-open-to-suggestions/58068/5 "2004-07-19T16:00:58Z")

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i thought it was pretty quick, originally the intro was supposed to last 70 frames, but i made it shorter. :mu:

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [July 19, 2004, 4:47pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/its-not-done-but-open-to-suggestions/58068/6 "2004-07-19T16:47:03Z")

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Do you want a critique on your rip? Or the latter?

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [July 19, 2004, 4:49pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/its-not-done-but-open-to-suggestions/58068/7 "2004-07-19T16:49:13Z")

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> [@dru\_nasty](#):
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> Do you want a critique on your rip? Or the latter?

Lol.

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [July 19, 2004, 4:53pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/its-not-done-but-open-to-suggestions/58068/8 "2004-07-19T16:53:35Z")

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heh…its just for practice, i read a thread by a member here that they have done mock-ups themselves!

> Who cares if Ingo made a mock-up? It’s a mock-up! I do mocks all the time. Just not whole sites. Mock-ups are for practice. 24-7media has a mock-up of [nsync.com](http://nsync.com) that I saw that they posted in their portfolio, once again all to practice…

i believe that The Reefster posted that :mu:

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [July 19, 2004, 5:35pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/its-not-done-but-open-to-suggestions/58068/9 "2004-07-19T17:35:17Z")

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Uh - okay? I didn’t say your site was a rip ;).

Theres nothing ripped about it.

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [July 19, 2004, 5:42pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/its-not-done-but-open-to-suggestions/58068/10 "2004-07-19T17:42:01Z")

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I think your animations take too much time to play and lag.

Also your navigation motion isn’t smoothe. And of course it reminds me of “this” 🙂

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [July 20, 2004, 12:19am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/its-not-done-but-open-to-suggestions/58068/11 "2004-07-20T00:19:28Z")

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how should i make it smooth? i put easing on the frames and everything, i dont know what else to do ☹
