# Layout need critique

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/layout-need-critique/125156>\
**Category:** Uncategorized\
**Created:** [October 11, 2004, 2:07am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/layout-need-critique/125156 "2004-10-11T02:07:57Z")\
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**Author:** ![SlowRoasted](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/a698b9/32.png) [@SlowRoasted](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/SlowRoasted)\
**Post date:** [October 11, 2004, 2:07am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/layout-need-critique/125156/1 "2004-10-11T02:07:57Z")

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Alright I have a job im doing right now and I have a major portion of the layout done, a few more things to do. I wanted to see what you guys have to say about it.

[http://www.christiandesign.net/ori/](http://www.christiandesign.net/ori/)

:cap: SR