# Lead-off page criticism **URL:** \ **Category:** Uncategorized\ **Created:** [July 2, 2004, 7:46am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/lead-off-page-criticism/56280 "2004-07-02T07:46:29Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 4\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![d100763](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/d/71c47a/32.png) [@d100763](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/d100763)\ **Post date:** [July 2, 2004, 7:46am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/lead-off-page-criticism/56280/1 "2004-07-02T07:46:29Z")
dearest members…I am trying to make a link page to my ongoing projects and want something simple. I just (as you may know) got Lightwave so I created a star formation, instead of my spinning boxes. Let me know what you think (size, color, formation etc). There are no links yet… Your feedback is much appreciated and returned [swf=http://www2.hawaii.edu/~djacso/projectspage.swf]width=500 height=300[/swf] ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 3, 2004, 2:29am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/lead-off-page-criticism/56280/2 "2004-07-03T02:29:35Z")
since I only recently got LW and have a hard time modeling, it’s a cone arrayed five times forming a star. I hit it again and came up with five stars interlocked. Not much of a story, but it got me thinking how different objects would look in array formation. I keep at it and will play with diffrent objects…Thanks for you guys time It looks like this from above ![](http://www2.hawaii.edu/%7Edjacso/starmodel.gif) ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 3, 2004, 5:31am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/lead-off-page-criticism/56280/3 "2004-07-03T05:31:00Z")
try bringing the saturation of the green background down a little more ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 3, 2004, 9:07am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/lead-off-page-criticism/56280/4 "2004-07-03T09:07:40Z")
Embed your fonts 🙂