# Line Art

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/line-art/38558>\
**Category:** design\
**Created:** [December 25, 2003, 7:22am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/line-art/38558 "2003-12-25T07:22:56Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 5\
**Page:** 1

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**Author:** ![Dog\_E](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/dog_e/32/360_2.png) [@Dog\_E](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Dog_E)\
**Post date:** [December 25, 2003, 7:22am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/line-art/38558/1 "2003-12-25T07:22:56Z")

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Hi, i want to get your opinions on some works of mine. They are all made in flash and i did no effects, nothing. Can you say sth?

[Blossom](http://www.boomspeed.com/dogi88/blossom.jpg)  
[Cloaked](http://www.boomspeed.com/dogi88/cloaked.jpg)  
[Dwarf](http://www.boomspeed.com/dogi88/DwarfAnime.jpg)

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [December 25, 2003, 8:27am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/line-art/38558/2 "2003-12-25T08:27:04Z")

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they all look pretty good, Nice capture of motion, but to me they look like they are one step from being complete. not sure , maybe some more shading, or more fine details. looking good though.

.soulty 🙂

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [December 26, 2003, 1:12am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/line-art/38558/3 "2003-12-26T01:12:51Z")

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the eyes of the first one are weird, but all of them look ok =)

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [December 26, 2003, 8:51pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/line-art/38558/4 "2003-12-26T20:51:44Z")

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The first is good and the best of the three but i agree with the eye comment.

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [December 27, 2003, 8:00pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/line-art/38558/5 "2003-12-27T20:00:07Z")

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some more shadding would definatly help.