# Logo critique take two

**URL:** https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-critique-take-two/149996
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**Created:** [June 2, 2005, 9:28pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-critique-take-two/149996 "2005-06-02T21:28:48Z")
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### Author: ![dude9er](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/d/4af34b/32.png) [@dude9er](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/dude9er)
#### Post date: [June 2, 2005, 9:28pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-critique-take-two/149996/1 "2005-06-02T21:28:48Z")

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Still trying to develop my logo. Getting into a little mental block and need some help. After taking some suggestions from my first post  
[Link 1](http://www.kirupa.com/forum/showthread.php?t=97091&page=1&pp=15)  
[Link 2](http://www.kirupa.com/forum/showthread.php?t=97091&page=2&pp=15)  
I’ve come up with these.

Any thoughts would be appreciated. Which is best and suggestions on improving them. Thanks everyone.