# Logo Critique?
**URL:** https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-critique/112756
**Category:** Uncategorized
**Created:** [June 11, 2004, 2:32am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-critique/112756 "2004-06-11T02:32:11Z")
**Posts on this page:** 14
**Page:** 3
### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [July 6, 2004, 12:11am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-critique/112756/41 "2004-07-06T00:11:19Z")
play nice kids…
---
### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [July 6, 2004, 12:12am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-critique/112756/42 "2004-07-06T00:12:15Z")
what seems to be the problem pixi?
---
### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [July 6, 2004, 12:13am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-critique/112756/43 "2004-07-06T00:13:58Z")
22 - You’re absolutely right. But what’s going to happen if I put a little copyright text next to it?
Nothing. Anyone can still take it, change it up and say it’s theres. I don’t mind. In my mind and on this forums, everyone knows I made it ;).
So if some loser, no skilled, desperate “designer” wants to take it, it’s all theres to use :).
---
### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [July 6, 2004, 12:15am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-critique/112756/44 "2004-07-06T00:15:33Z")
well, ok, if u dont have any problems with it, i guess its allright.
**how did you write Ms.PShop.07412 under your nickname?**
---
### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [July 6, 2004, 12:23am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-critique/112756/45 "2004-07-06T00:23:15Z")
What are you talking about :P?
---
### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [July 6, 2004, 12:27am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-critique/112756/46 "2004-07-06T00:27:34Z")
under Sharif, it says Mr.PShop.07412…how did u do that? how did u write Mr.PShop.07412 under your name?
---
### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [July 6, 2004, 12:52am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-critique/112756/47 "2004-07-06T00:52:01Z")
By going to profile, and editing my avatar text :P.
---
### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [July 6, 2004, 1:20am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-critique/112756/48 "2004-07-06T01:20:28Z")
thnx
---
### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [July 7, 2004, 8:55pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-critique/112756/49 "2004-07-07T20:55:27Z")
It looks like I’ve finally settled on a final design. Only minor tweaks will be made on this one, no major overhauls. What do you think?
---
### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [July 7, 2004, 9:01pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-critique/112756/50 "2004-07-07T21:01:30Z")
This design looks a little too empty as your logos. The lines are way too thin. You should really take a look at what Mass and I created and make something better out of it.
The font for one on this logo looks wrong, the color looks wrong. The edges look jagged. And the 2 outer curves look out of porportion.
Just tryin’ to help.
---
### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [July 7, 2004, 9:05pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-critique/112756/51 "2004-07-07T21:05:30Z")
yeah, add some more blur to it like the others
---
### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [July 7, 2004, 9:06pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-critique/112756/52 "2004-07-07T21:06:11Z")
The jagged edges are due to the fact that I haven’t smoothed them or anything. The colors will be changed to fit with my new site layout.
Once you see it in context with its positioning on the site I think you’ll see more of what I was trying to do.
---
### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [July 8, 2004, 12:45am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-critique/112756/53 "2004-07-08T00:45:38Z")
Nice logo, initially it reminded me of the Columbus Coluseum Columbus Ohio logo by Chermeyeff and Geismar. The shapes reflect the “CCCO”, the first letters in the name…The second rendition reminds me of a biohazard sign, which is based on an old Japanese family symbol. It’s very interesting…
---
### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [July 20, 2004, 12:14am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-critique/112756/54 "2004-07-20T00:14:55Z")
krilnon, when is your new site going to be up? i really want to see how you are going to incorporate the logo with the rest of your site! :mu:
[Previous page](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-critique/112756.md?page=2)