# Logo Critique **URL:** \ **Category:** design\ **Created:** [July 19, 2003, 5:01am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-critique/26072 "2003-07-19T05:01:43Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 9\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![redViper](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/r/3d9bf3/32.png) [@redViper](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/redViper)\ **Post date:** [July 19, 2003, 5:01am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-critique/26072/1 "2003-07-19T05:01:43Z")
It’s for a catering company that me and my friends family are starting up. I’m not persian, but they are… and they came up with the name. lol. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 19, 2003, 5:12am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-critique/26072/2 "2003-07-19T05:12:37Z")
i really dont like it. the letters seem to be in the boarders to much. i would like to see them sendered a bit more. also i dont like the gradient, i think in this case flat colours are called for. i think you came up with better ones before. sorry :-\ JMHO ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 19, 2003, 5:15am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-critique/26072/3 "2003-07-19T05:15:49Z")
the letters are suppose to be off to the side. 😛 thanks for your opinion. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 19, 2003, 5:17am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-critique/26072/4 "2003-07-19T05:17:47Z")
it doesnt really remind me of a catering company, or food, or something like that. the look of the logo seems more like an insurance company. try to incorporate food in the logo, it might make the idea a bit more obvious. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 19, 2003, 5:20am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-critique/26072/5 "2003-07-19T05:20:26Z")
It is a good logo but replode said it right it does not remind me of food…But it is \*\*\*\* good tho I lik its simplictiy ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 19, 2003, 5:22am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-critique/26072/6 "2003-07-19T05:22:23Z")
> \*Originally posted by redViper \* > \*\*the letters are suppose to be off to the side. 😛 thanks for your opinion. \*\* yeah i know. at first it bugged me, but its getting to be a little better the more i look at it. but i still might rather them centered. i dont know, i jsut dont think it fits with what you are doing also. i think a catering company needs to have a playful fun logo, not a corperate suit and tie kinda thing. it doesnt fit the food. do you get it? i tend to think of food as fun. untill you get to like 4 star french cooking, then its corperate, but for your catagory, think playful and fun. JMO again ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 19, 2003, 5:25am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-critique/26072/7 "2003-07-19T05:25:00Z")
you could put pictures of you fines dishes behind the letters…but make sure the letters are still visable!!! ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 19, 2003, 5:27am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-critique/26072/8 "2003-07-19T05:27:34Z")
thats a good idea, but i dont htink this logo fits, even with that…well i will stop nagging it. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 19, 2003, 5:32am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-critique/26072/9 "2003-07-19T05:32:16Z")
Good, logo, nice gradient touch too… But positions is a bit bad… even if its on purpose