# Logo Rough **URL:** \ **Category:** design\ **Created:** [May 29, 2008, 2:25pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-rough/261644 "2008-05-29T14:25:56Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 17\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![Mr\_Kikkoman](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/m/919ad9/32.png) [@Mr\_Kikkoman](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Mr_Kikkoman)\ **Post date:** [May 29, 2008, 2:25pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-rough/261644/1 "2008-05-29T14:25:56Z")
I need some help with this logo. It needs to be fun and represent the Hispanic culture. Any suggestions? BTW - the top is just the color palette I’m using. ---
**Author:** ![w1sh](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/w/7feea3/32.png) [@w1sh](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/w1sh)\ **Post date:** [May 29, 2008, 2:37pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-rough/261644/2 "2008-05-29T14:37:21Z")
![](http://www.freewebs.com/french-spanish-club-for-children/Spanish_Logo.jpg) For your entertainment while I think about this. ---
**Author:** ![w1sh](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/w/7feea3/32.png) [@w1sh](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/w1sh)\ **Post date:** [May 29, 2008, 2:42pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-rough/261644/3 "2008-05-29T14:42:43Z")
Maybe you should incorporate a hispanic blanket (forget what they’re called) patterns into the design. ---
**Author:** ![webdesignernew](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/w/df788c/32.png) [@webdesignernew](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/webdesignernew)\ **Post date:** [May 29, 2008, 2:42pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-rough/261644/4 "2008-05-29T14:42:46Z")
I am not, what does it need to show a snail? [http://www.soula.com](http://www.soula.com/) ---
**Author:** ![haam](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/h/a698b9/32.png) [@haam](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/haam)\ **Post date:** [May 29, 2008, 3:14pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-rough/261644/5 "2008-05-29T15:14:34Z")
@w1sh - lmao, when i first opened the thread i thought yours was the logo to crit! @Mr.Kikkoman - i like it. simple and fun. what are those colored rectangles above the logo? are those part of the logo, i don’t think they are necessary if they are. the idea of an [illustrated blanket](http://www.lathamtrading.com/catalog/images/fancyreddiamond.jpg) is cool too. ---
**Author:** ![Mr\_Kikkoman](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/m/919ad9/32.png) [@Mr\_Kikkoman](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Mr_Kikkoman)\ **Post date:** [May 29, 2008, 5:13pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-rough/261644/6 "2008-05-29T17:13:52Z")
@haam [quote=Mr.Kikkoman;2333009][COLOR=Red]BTW - the top is just the color palette I’m using.[/COLOR][/quote] 😠 Thanks for the comment @w1sh Best logo ever. ---
**Author:** ![built\_by](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/built_by/32/1994_2.png) [@built\_by](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/built_by)\ **Post date:** [May 29, 2008, 6:15pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-rough/261644/7 "2008-05-29T18:15:14Z")
I actually don’t really mind what you have there, it’s simple and but still fun to look at. ---
**Author:** ![ajcates](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/ajcates/32/2435_2.png) [@ajcates](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/ajcates)\ **Post date:** [May 30, 2008, 7:01am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-rough/261644/8 "2008-05-30T07:01:05Z")
I like it, it is very mexican, with out all the clashing colors and other horrible design trends that come with that culture. ---
**Author:** ![Mr\_Kikkoman](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/m/919ad9/32.png) [@Mr\_Kikkoman](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Mr_Kikkoman)\ **Post date:** [May 30, 2008, 11:49am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-rough/261644/9 "2008-05-30T11:49:52Z")
> [@ajcates;2333473](#): > > I like it, it is very mexican, with out all the clashing colors and other horrible design trends that come with that culture. haha! thanks. I just tweaked it a bit. I made the a’s and o’s all different so it’s more unique and looks less like a font. I also extended the v so it reaches the same height as the ‘T’. I have a version with dots in the o’s too. I think it looks… [U]funner [/U] ---
**Author:** ![ajcates](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/ajcates/32/2435_2.png) [@ajcates](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/ajcates)\ **Post date:** [May 30, 2008, 4:32pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-rough/261644/10 "2008-05-30T16:32:56Z")
I don’t like the dots in the O’s. So I would have to say the second one. ---
**Author:** ![Esherido](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/esherido/32/2158_2.png) [@Esherido](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Esherido)\ **Post date:** [May 30, 2008, 4:55pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-rough/261644/11 "2008-05-30T16:55:22Z")
I liked the first one you posted the best. Not feeling the one with the dots, they just seem kind of stupid. ---
**Author:** ![anon1712571](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/a/9dc877/32.png) [@anon1712571](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/anon1712571)\ **Post date:** [May 31, 2008, 10:34am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-rough/261644/12 "2008-05-31T10:34:24Z")
I think you need to drop the total width of the logo to be functional ---
**Author:** ![Mr\_Kikkoman](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/m/919ad9/32.png) [@Mr\_Kikkoman](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Mr_Kikkoman)\ **Post date:** [May 31, 2008, 4:13pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-rough/261644/13 "2008-05-31T16:13:50Z")
what do you mean by drop the total width? are you referring to the letter-spacing/tracking? ---
**Author:** ![anon1712571](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/a/9dc877/32.png) [@anon1712571](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/anon1712571)\ **Post date:** [June 3, 2008, 1:37pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-rough/261644/14 "2008-06-03T13:37:09Z")
As a total parent width, the _whole_ logo is really wide. Consider making the subtext sit below? ---
**Author:** ![fasterthanlight](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/f/ecc23a/32.png) [@fasterthanlight](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/fasterthanlight)\ **Post date:** [June 3, 2008, 1:56pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-rough/261644/15 "2008-06-03T13:56:07Z")
I don’t mind its width… I don’t think you could move around “To go” and pull off something like how the tail of A goes into the T… thats smooth. ---
**Author:** ![anon1712571](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/a/9dc877/32.png) [@anon1712571](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/anon1712571)\ **Post date:** [June 3, 2008, 2:06pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-rough/261644/16 "2008-06-03T14:06:51Z")
^ HMMMMMM good point! I guess it also reads better in the horizontal linear format. You _could_ try hooking the A down below? Just need to watch for negative space! ---
**Author:** ![fasterthanlight](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/f/ecc23a/32.png) [@fasterthanlight](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/fasterthanlight)\ **Post date:** [June 3, 2008, 2:12pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/logo-rough/261644/17 "2008-06-03T14:12:37Z")
I think you can play around with “to go” to make it look more fancy, you should also adjust the kerning on To Go, to bring it in tighter. Also, see if putting “Go” underneath and to the right of “To” reads OK, this could reduce the overall width, but only if it reads ok, I think if you do this it could be too disjointed i think the logo needs a glyph …