# MWAB Productions **URL:** \ **Category:** design\ **Created:** [March 21, 2002, 9:52pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/mwab-productions/4117 "2002-03-21T21:52:31Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 3\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [March 21, 2002, 9:52pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/mwab-productions/4117/1 "2002-03-21T21:52:31Z")
Check it out and tell me what you think. [www.mwab.net](http://www.mwab.net) - Nick ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [March 21, 2002, 10:24pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/mwab-productions/4117/2 "2002-03-21T22:24:04Z")
Nick, I like the layout but I have to get critical on some of the writing. There are too many words and too many derogatory statements that don’t make you look good. I can’t copy and paste them here (obviously) but I’d be more than happy to help you with the copy. Don’t take it personally, it’s just that it looks a little unprofessional or that you aren’t giving yourself enough credit. 🙂 t2d ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [March 22, 2002, 5:50pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/mwab-productions/4117/3 "2002-03-22T17:50:25Z")
I won’t comment on the Flash part, just one thing: Please, name your html page something else than “home”, imagine a potential customer bookmarks this, goes looking for it in his fav’s, how’s he supposed to find it again?!! Give the page a title that will be explicit in search results, like “MWAB -web design comes cheap…”, whatever, but name it! Also, don’t tell people the usuall rate is 50$ an hour and you’ll do the job for 40$, that sounds like you really need work desperatly and they might even get it for less then that, just tell’em the standard rates and to contact you for an estimate…