# My 1st entry: Free4All Mag

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-1st-entry-free4all-mag/185237>\
**Category:** Uncategorized\
**Created:** [April 11, 2006, 10:03pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-1st-entry-free4all-mag/185237 "2006-04-11T22:03:01Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 8\
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**Author:** ![40Unregistered](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/4/87869e/32.png) [@40Unregistered](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/40Unregistered)\
**Post date:** [April 11, 2006, 10:03pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-1st-entry-free4all-mag/185237/1 "2006-04-11T22:03:01Z")

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my 1st entry:

![](http://www.geocities.com/situsindo/coverfree4all.jpg)

courtesy  
Artworks:  
Red Moon by Svetlin Velinov (CGNetworks)  
Blizzard’s Blood elf female & Diablo II Logo

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**Author:** ![JoshuaJonah](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/joshuajonah/32/1775_2.png) [@JoshuaJonah](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/JoshuaJonah)\
**Post date:** [April 11, 2006, 10:11pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-1st-entry-free4all-mag/185237/2 "2006-04-11T22:11:05Z")

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nice, but id never buy it:)

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**Author:** ![40Unregistered](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/4/87869e/32.png) [@40Unregistered](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/40Unregistered)\
**Post date:** [April 12, 2006, 3:54am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-1st-entry-free4all-mag/185237/3 "2006-04-12T03:54:13Z")

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> [@Defective](#):
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> nice, but id never buy it:)

:cyclops: why?  
c&c please

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**Author:** ![TheCanadian](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/t/67e7ee/32.png) [@TheCanadian](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/TheCanadian)\
**Post date:** [April 12, 2006, 6:54am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-1st-entry-free4all-mag/185237/4 "2006-04-12T06:54:20Z")

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Are you too genius? Subscribe now and win iPod? It looks good except for those grammatical errors and to be fair, you just put some text over top of a picture which you didn’t make 🙂

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**Author:** ![40Unregistered](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/4/87869e/32.png) [@40Unregistered](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/40Unregistered)\
**Post date:** [April 12, 2006, 8:14am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-1st-entry-free4all-mag/185237/5 "2006-04-12T08:14:21Z")

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> [@TheCanadian](#):
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> Are you too genius? Subscribe now and win iPod? It looks good except for those grammatical errors and to be fair, you just put some text over top of a picture which you didn’t make 🙂

yeah… well, english isnt my language :book:  
do we have to create our own picture to put it in the cover?

anyway, thanks. ia apppreciate your crit:rabbit:

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**Author:** ![SlowRoasted](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/a698b9/32.png) [@SlowRoasted](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/SlowRoasted)\
**Post date:** [April 12, 2006, 6:03pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-1st-entry-free4all-mag/185237/6 "2006-04-12T18:03:26Z")

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Not bad, not too fond of the color choice, but its still okay.

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**Author:** ![saitex](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/e495f1/32.png) [@saitex](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/saitex)\
**Post date:** [April 12, 2006, 6:08pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-1st-entry-free4all-mag/185237/7 "2006-04-12T18:08:28Z")

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its a bit tacky but nice effort. but i would remove the subscribe now and win an ipod. anyways man good luck.

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**Author:** ![40Unregistered](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/4/87869e/32.png) [@40Unregistered](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/40Unregistered)\
**Post date:** [April 13, 2006, 2:24am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-1st-entry-free4all-mag/185237/8 "2006-04-13T02:24:36Z")

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thx. i leave it as it is now.  
hope my 2nd entry will be better. i’ll use all my own works on the cover, and learn english grammatical twice a day! :beam: