# My 2 first drawings in Flash!

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**Category:** design\
**Created:** [July 9, 2004, 1:26am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-2-first-drawings-in-flash/56947 "2004-07-09T01:26:34Z")\
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**Author:** ![slumgutt](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/4da419/32.png) [@slumgutt](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/slumgutt)\
**Post date:** [July 9, 2004, 1:26am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-2-first-drawings-in-flash/56947/1 "2004-07-09T01:26:34Z")

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Hey!

I’ve just finished my two first drawings in flash. It didn’t quite turn out as planned so I would love some C&C on both pieces!

Links:  
[http://www.dengyldnemynt.com/jonas.jpg](http://www.dengyldnemynt.com/jonas.jpg)

[http://www.dengyldnemynt.com/test.jpg](http://www.dengyldnemynt.com/test.jpg)

Thanks!

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [July 9, 2004, 1:50am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-2-first-drawings-in-flash/56947/2 "2004-07-09T01:50:25Z")

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I really like the 2nd one. Did you trace an image or is it freehand?

As for the portrait. It’s also good but I think you should take the color out of the white area of the eye.

Nice work though.

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [July 9, 2004, 1:54am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-2-first-drawings-in-flash/56947/3 "2004-07-09T01:54:10Z")

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Thanx alot!

The 2d is part freehand, part traced - about 50-50. I had to trace an image to get the perspectiv right. I’m glad you liked it, cuz it took forever to make it:)

I agree on the white in the eyes now that you mentioned it!

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [July 9, 2004, 3:57am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-2-first-drawings-in-flash/56947/4 "2004-07-09T03:57:54Z")

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You also might want to try some more shading instead of hard lines on the portrait. The lines around the nose and under the eyes make the person look old.

just an idea.

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [July 9, 2004, 5:02am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-2-first-drawings-in-flash/56947/5 "2004-07-09T05:02:20Z")

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Jupp, you got a point! But shading in flash is hard to do… Have you seen [www.vectorizedme.com](http://www.vectorizedme.com)? He’s got the hang of it:)

Hey, what do you think of my new footer? 🙂

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [July 9, 2004, 5:27am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-2-first-drawings-in-flash/56947/6 "2004-07-09T05:27:29Z")

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Yeah if you squint at [vectorizedme.com](http://vectorizedme.com) it looks real good.

And you footer is good. Like a mini-site.