# My 2nd illustrator job

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-2nd-illustrator-job/202744>\
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**Created:** [October 4, 2006, 12:46pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-2nd-illustrator-job/202744 "2006-10-04T12:46:57Z")\
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**Author:** ![kmria](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/kmria/32/2248_2.png) [@kmria](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/kmria)\
**Post date:** [October 4, 2006, 12:46pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-2nd-illustrator-job/202744/1 "2006-10-04T12:46:57Z")

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Hey guys,

After last times messy work and your critiques I have try to improve my work. Before I get you bored on that, Here is my 2nd ever illustrator art work. I would love to know if there is any thing I can improve it with.

Here is the original image.  
 ![](http://pichotel.com/pic/4127T0ui1/67733.jpg)

And here it is after tracing job.

![](http://pichotel.com/pic/4127T0ui1/73304.jpg)

Please give me your feedback.

Thanks,  
Amit