# My Entry: Music Magazine **URL:** \ **Category:** contests\ **Created:** [April 8, 2006, 9:21pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-entry-music-magazine/184889 "2006-04-08T21:21:06Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 16\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![Ste](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/76d3ee/32.png) [@Ste](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Ste)\ **Post date:** [April 8, 2006, 9:21pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-entry-music-magazine/184889/1 "2006-04-08T21:21:06Z")
Hi i’m new here :thumb: Here is my entry, cover for a music magazine:mu: [![](http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/7757/magcoverv20gj.th.jpg)](http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/7757/magcoverv20gj.jpg) [http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/7757/magcoverv20gj.jpg](http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/1933/magcover3pn.jpg) ---
**Author:** ![esnetni](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/e/b5a626/32.png) [@esnetni](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/esnetni)\ **Post date:** [April 8, 2006, 9:51pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-entry-music-magazine/184889/2 "2006-04-08T21:51:03Z")
Wow Impressive its brilliant. ---
**Author:** ![raduku](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/r/a5b964/32.png) [@raduku](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/raduku)\ **Post date:** [April 9, 2006, 7:44am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-entry-music-magazine/184889/3 "2006-04-09T07:44:20Z")
good job, i like it, especialy the black & white picture in the background :sailor: ---
**Author:** ![icleric](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/i/4bbf92/32.png) [@icleric](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/icleric)\ **Post date:** [April 9, 2006, 12:18pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-entry-music-magazine/184889/4 "2006-04-09T12:18:15Z")
i like this one :thumb: ---
**Author:** ![Mitch](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/m/dec6dc/32.png) [@Mitch](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Mitch)\ **Post date:** [April 9, 2006, 3:06pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-entry-music-magazine/184889/5 "2006-04-09T15:06:41Z")
I like the tecno look 😃 nice style dude. But it misses something… ---
**Author:** ![SlowRoasted](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/a698b9/32.png) [@SlowRoasted](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/SlowRoasted)\ **Post date:** [April 9, 2006, 4:26pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-entry-music-magazine/184889/6 "2006-04-09T16:26:04Z")
Looking good, I like the colors and the font on the title. I agree you could go further with it. ---
**Author:** ![Ste](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/76d3ee/32.png) [@Ste](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Ste)\ **Post date:** [April 9, 2006, 9:49pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-entry-music-magazine/184889/7 "2006-04-09T21:49:46Z")
> [@SlowRoasted](#): > > Looking good, I like the colors and the font on the title. I agree you could go further with it. Thanks a lot for the comments. How could i take it further? Im not sure what to add without taking away the clean look. ---
**Author:** ![krilnon](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/krilnon/32/34_2.png) [@krilnon](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/krilnon)\ **Post date:** [April 9, 2006, 10:01pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-entry-music-magazine/184889/8 "2006-04-09T22:01:38Z")
You might not want to have white text with a white background. For example, in “We sort the men from **the** boys”, “the” is hardly able to be read. ---
**Author:** ![TheCanadian](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/t/67e7ee/32.png) [@TheCanadian](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/TheCanadian)\ **Post date:** [April 10, 2006, 12:35am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-entry-music-magazine/184889/9 "2006-04-10T00:35:49Z")
I can read it fine, but I’m not a big fan of the line going through the persons face. Other than that it looks great :thumb: ---
**Author:** ![sameerzs](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/sameerzs/32/810_2.png) [@sameerzs](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/sameerzs)\ **Post date:** [April 10, 2006, 2:09pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-entry-music-magazine/184889/10 "2006-04-10T14:09:34Z")
nice 🙂 ---
**Author:** ![Armored](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/a/5f9b8f/32.png) [@Armored](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Armored)\ **Post date:** [April 10, 2006, 2:57pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-entry-music-magazine/184889/11 "2006-04-10T14:57:11Z")
Very nice! Great idea, nice picture and good choice of color scheme. But I would say it is somehow unballanced with all the text lined up to the right. Also move the bottom large entry somewhere else, off the face. Just my two cents… ---
**Author:** ![Ste](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/76d3ee/32.png) [@Ste](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Ste)\ **Post date:** [April 11, 2006, 3:26pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-entry-music-magazine/184889/12 "2006-04-11T15:26:34Z")
Thanks for all the comments, i have made a small update. ---
**Author:** ![poccer2](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/p/a88e57/32.png) [@poccer2](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/poccer2)\ **Post date:** [April 12, 2006, 8:41am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-entry-music-magazine/184889/13 "2006-04-12T08:41:44Z")
> [@Ste](#): > > Hi i’m new here :thumb: > > Here is my entry, cover for a music magazine:mu: > > [http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/7757/magcoverv20gj.jpg](http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/7757/magcoverv20gj.jpg) Nice! I like the use of Black and white. Also how the blue blends in whith the colours.I like here earphones they are well coloured and well done! Nice job! poccer2 ---
**Author:** ![ravicreative](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/r/f475e1/32.png) [@ravicreative](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/ravicreative)\ **Post date:** [April 22, 2006, 6:32am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-entry-music-magazine/184889/14 "2006-04-22T06:32:30Z")
TUNEAGE title need to be done some patchwork.looks like it is just pasted on the cover…make it more realistic… ---
**Author:** ![n\_digo](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/n/47e85d/32.png) [@n\_digo](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/n_digo)\ **Post date:** [April 22, 2006, 6:55am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-entry-music-magazine/184889/15 "2006-04-22T06:55:17Z")
I say it’s realistic enough! i also like the reflection of the title in her eyes ---
**Author:** ![itsalljazzy](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/i/258eb7/32.png) [@itsalljazzy](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/itsalljazzy)\ **Post date:** [May 1, 2006, 6:01am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-entry-music-magazine/184889/16 "2006-05-01T06:01:27Z")
I think this one looks cool…I really like the blue additions… =)