# My first attempt on human potrait. Need comments

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-attempt-on-human-potrait-need-comments/16800>\
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**Created:** [March 28, 2003, 2:24pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-attempt-on-human-potrait-need-comments/16800 "2003-03-28T14:24:07Z")\
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**Author:** ![silverType](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/ac91a4/32.png) [@silverType](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/silverType)\
**Post date:** [March 28, 2003, 2:24pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-attempt-on-human-potrait-need-comments/16800/1 "2003-03-28T14:24:07Z")

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Hi guys, here’s my first attempt on human potrait. It’s done in photoshop. I will be glad to accept all your valuable comments on this piece of work. Thank you.

🙂

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [March 28, 2003, 3:02pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-attempt-on-human-potrait-need-comments/16800/2 "2003-03-28T15:02:41Z")

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I really like it 🙂 Nice style :beam:

- Soul :s:

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [March 28, 2003, 3:08pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-attempt-on-human-potrait-need-comments/16800/3 "2003-03-28T15:08:26Z")

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Thanks. Glad that you like it. 🙂

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [March 28, 2003, 3:12pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-attempt-on-human-potrait-need-comments/16800/4 "2003-03-28T15:12:54Z")

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How about the rest of the body now? 🙂

- Soul :s:

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [March 28, 2003, 3:16pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-attempt-on-human-potrait-need-comments/16800/5 "2003-03-28T15:16:39Z")

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Hehe…I’ll try :sure:

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [March 28, 2003, 3:24pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-attempt-on-human-potrait-need-comments/16800/6 "2003-03-28T15:24:18Z")

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🙂

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [March 28, 2003, 7:49pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-attempt-on-human-potrait-need-comments/16800/7 "2003-03-28T19:49:18Z")

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It’s a good first portrait. Zoom in and try adding more details. The armit/shoulder area seems a little weird though… the perspective seems out of place. Are you going for a more realistic look?

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [March 28, 2003, 8:00pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-attempt-on-human-potrait-need-comments/16800/8 "2003-03-28T20:00:09Z")

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i am all with Ren

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [March 29, 2003, 12:51am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-attempt-on-human-potrait-need-comments/16800/9 "2003-03-29T00:51:47Z")

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Er…ok. I will look into that. Thanks.

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [March 29, 2003, 6:42am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-attempt-on-human-potrait-need-comments/16800/10 "2003-03-29T06:42:05Z")

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wow man! That’s one nice work! I like it a lot!

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [March 29, 2003, 7:19am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-attempt-on-human-potrait-need-comments/16800/11 "2003-03-29T07:19:30Z")

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Thank you. 🙂

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [April 25, 2003, 11:21am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-attempt-on-human-potrait-need-comments/16800/12 "2003-04-25T11:21:18Z")

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hello,  
looks great !!  
You can works on eyes/lips improvement.

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [April 26, 2003, 10:40am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-attempt-on-human-potrait-need-comments/16800/13 "2003-04-26T10:40:57Z")

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she looks ill… but i geuss thats what you were after… hehe

nice work