# My first attempt, pls critique

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-attempt-pls-critique/84509>\
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**Created:** [March 28, 2005, 1:34pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-attempt-pls-critique/84509 "2005-03-28T13:34:26Z")\
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**Author:** ![d\_sync00](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/d/7bcc69/32.png) [@d\_sync00](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/d_sync00)\
**Post date:** [March 28, 2005, 1:34pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-attempt-pls-critique/84509/1 "2005-03-28T13:34:26Z")

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Guys here’s my first attempt, am not finished though i’ll love ur comment as i wrap things up, couldn’t have done this without you.  
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