# My First Critique here!

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-critique-here/58089>\
**Category:** design\
**Created:** [July 19, 2004, 6:09pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-critique-here/58089 "2004-07-19T18:09:43Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 7\
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**Author:** ![werd](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/w/4491bb/32.png) [@werd](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/werd)\
**Post date:** [July 19, 2004, 6:09pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-critique-here/58089/1 "2004-07-19T18:09:43Z")

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Ok I been working on this d@mn vector piece for a while now and I see that its going to take me FOREVER. Looks good to me now but I want to see if you people will think it will look great when it is finished. I still have to finish up the outlines then I will move on to the color…  
 ![](http://illology.com/forumstuff/Shining_Gundam.jpg)[url=“[http://illology.com/forumstuff/shining\_gundam.jpg](http://illology.com/forumstuff/shining_gundam.jpg)”]

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [July 19, 2004, 6:45pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-critique-here/58089/2 "2004-07-19T18:45:58Z")

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i think you overdid it. there is way to much detail, and i think when you color it, it will be very overwhelming. maybe you should remove some of the small useless stuff on this dude, like those things sticking out of his knees and that stuff on his back.

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [July 19, 2004, 6:56pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-critique-here/58089/3 "2004-07-19T18:56:05Z")

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yea i agree. im was trying to do every detail and thats why its taking me forever. the things on his back, especially those vents i am having trouble with. i have the same gundam figurine and it does not have those things on the back either.

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [July 19, 2004, 6:59pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-critique-here/58089/4 "2004-07-19T18:59:46Z")

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looks cool, I want to see it with color 🙂

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [July 19, 2004, 7:06pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-critique-here/58089/5 "2004-07-19T19:06:04Z")

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Very nice job! I think it will look great colored! :thumb:

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [July 19, 2004, 7:13pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-critique-here/58089/6 "2004-07-19T19:13:58Z")

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looks good. be careful coloring though. the wrong colors could make it look horrible.

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [July 19, 2004, 7:22pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-critique-here/58089/7 "2004-07-19T19:22:30Z")

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> looks good. be careful coloring though. the wrong colors could make it look horrible.

Agreed