# My first Flash attempt **URL:** \ **Category:** design\ **Created:** [April 28, 2003, 10:17am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-flash-attempt/19446 "2003-04-28T10:17:57Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 8\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![TheOrangeOne](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/t/67e7ee/32.png) [@TheOrangeOne](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/TheOrangeOne)\ **Post date:** [April 28, 2003, 10:17am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-flash-attempt/19446/1 "2003-04-28T10:17:57Z")
hi, im new to flash animation and have just completed my first flash cartoon and wondered what people wil think of it. I know it may not seem too good, but i like it. I was basically testing out the effects i could acheive using flash and i have had great fun learning. It uses only the most basic of action script and needs a loading screen (im working on one right now, thanks to the Kirupa tutorial i found here), so the first time you run it, it may be jerky, but the second time should be fine (hopes). Who knows, one day i may actually produce something decent… :)[COLOR=orange]range[/COLOR] [Dr Zin and Dr Niz](http://www.rahindeed.com/Zinandniz/Part1/Zin%20Niz%20part%20one.htm) (by the way, it says “part 5”, but thats because the characters used to be in a comic i did for college) ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [April 28, 2003, 11:06am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-flash-attempt/19446/2 "2003-04-28T11:06:30Z")
Well, why dont you post it so we can all take a peek at it =) ? ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [April 28, 2003, 11:14am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-flash-attempt/19446/3 "2003-04-28T11:14:17Z")
oops, me silly (blushes) the link is on the post now! :sigh: [COLOR=orange]range[/COLOR] ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [April 28, 2003, 12:16pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-flash-attempt/19446/4 "2003-04-28T12:16:42Z")
pretty wacky! ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [April 30, 2003, 4:32am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-flash-attempt/19446/5 "2003-04-30T04:32:13Z")
It’s pretty creative and funny. The “I hate him part” drags on too long though. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [April 30, 2003, 5:43am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-flash-attempt/19446/6 "2003-04-30T05:43:09Z")
hahaha… very funny. i could have nver come up with that ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [April 30, 2003, 4:09pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-flash-attempt/19446/7 "2003-04-30T16:09:13Z")
Nice job ! Funny, and A VERY good soundtrack selection!!! RATM!!! :A+: ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 1, 2003, 1:38pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-flash-attempt/19446/8 "2003-05-01T13:38:45Z")
> \*Originally posted by Supree \* > \*\*It’s pretty creative and funny. The “I hate him part” drags on too long though. \*\* yeah, i agree totally. I’ll cut it down for my next update. I have started on part two now, hopefully that one will turn out better. This first part was really just a practise run. Thanks for the support by the way guys - means a lot to me!