# My first flash movie

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**Created:** [May 16, 2008, 10:58pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-flash-movie/260581 "2008-05-16T22:58:59Z")\
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**Author:** ![samifox](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/ecae2f/32.png) [@samifox](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/samifox)\
**Post date:** [May 16, 2008, 10:58pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-flash-movie/260581/1 "2008-05-16T22:58:59Z")

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Hi,  
this is my first flash website ever published. its not a template based.  
any comments and critiques will be appreciated,

[http://www41.websamba.com/Shikum](http://www41.websamba.com/Shikum)

Thanks  
Shay

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**Author:** ![anon1712571](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/a/9dc877/32.png) [@anon1712571](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/anon1712571)\
**Post date:** [May 17, 2008, 12:07am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-flash-movie/260581/2 "2008-05-17T00:07:41Z")

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Ideas to improve:  
[LIST]  
[\*]Typo in the header info- “gaphic” should be _graphic_.

[\*]Pick some more readable type for the top left header.

[\*]Make the scrollbar hit area for the slider larger.

[\*]Kill the music. It doesn’t serve a purpose.

[\*]Crisp the type.

[\*]Make the transitions less linear, and add more complexity to them, rather than just a transition sliding in and out.  
[/LIST]

Hope this is a decent start!

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**Author:** ![Hydra](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/h/ccd318/32.png) [@Hydra](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Hydra)\
**Post date:** [May 17, 2008, 9:58am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-flash-movie/260581/3 "2008-05-17T09:58:16Z")

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The music doesnt serve at all but a lot of effects in the best sites doesnt serve too.  
The music is a surplus and if the user likes the song he can hear it or stop it.

I agree with darkmotion about the font. Change it in one more readable.

Anyway to be your first website in flash i think that it could be a good start 🙂