# My First Flash Site

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-flash-site/3726>\
**Category:** design\
**Created:** [October 14, 2001, 6:15pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-flash-site/3726 "2001-10-14T18:15:47Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 6\
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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [October 14, 2001, 6:15pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-flash-site/3726/1 "2001-10-14T18:15:47Z")

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Hi everyone,

Please visit my first flash site and give me some feedback:

[www.geocities.com/timhlu/flashgws.html](http://www.geocities.com/timhlu/flashgws.html)

Cheers,  
Tim

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**Post date:** [October 14, 2001, 8:22pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-flash-site/3726/2 "2001-10-14T20:22:57Z")

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you have already posted that here before and we all saw it… or at least i remember looking at it… my one opinion is that it lacke creativity, excitement and overall artistic talent [no offense]

my ideas would be to add some shapes… some sort of weird designs… something… blur this, speed up that… things like that… its too plain overall i guess is what i am getting to.

tryin to help… =] oh and shouldnt this topic be under ‘site check’ section?

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**Post date:** [October 15, 2001, 3:14am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-flash-site/3726/3 "2001-10-15T03:14:32Z")

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i think your site is good content wise. and in the idea of it. What brings your site down is the execution of these elements. I would suggest you look through some of flashkits featured sites for inspiration.

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**Post date:** [October 15, 2001, 5:04am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-flash-site/3726/4 "2001-10-15T05:04:04Z")

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lol i sound like an as$hole… heh sorry bro… not meant like that at all. i had to reread it again to see =]

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**Post date:** [October 15, 2001, 8:26am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-flash-site/3726/5 "2001-10-15T08:26:45Z")

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i think it is v.good for your first attemp…u should have seen my first flash orintated site…IT sucked!!! :lol:

now that u have got the basics of flash…as the others say…why not try spicing it up a bit…

a bit of animation wouldn’t go a miss…

overall…well done…

cheers…ben…

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**Post date:** [October 15, 2001, 1:29pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-flash-site/3726/6 "2001-10-15T13:29:57Z")

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dude that site wasn’t made in flash! that was made in swish, i betchya.

on the tute for making sites on swish ((yawn)) it has that same site but u changes all the words to shark stuff. and your intro, thats done on swish too. im so sure of it.

but well done. swish is so boring u to use i give u all the credit for doing it.