# My first flash website :) **URL:** \ **Category:** Uncategorized\ **Created:** [September 20, 2004, 5:54am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-flash-website/64799 "2004-09-20T05:54:05Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 6\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![phyzar](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/p/6a8cbe/32.png) [@phyzar](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/phyzar)\ **Post date:** [September 20, 2004, 5:54am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-flash-website/64799/1 "2004-09-20T05:54:05Z")
hey guys, i respect this board and its member’s opinions, many of you have helped me out, so as ive tried to help others. 🙂 Ive finally finished a revamp for a website. The orginal is here: [www.triligy.com/old](http://www.triligy.com/old) site/ the new one is here: [www.triligy.com](http://www.triligy.com) Let me know what you think! It has been a real steep learning curve, but im now managing to create flash websites in a billionth of the time! any “decent” comments will be favoured 🙂 again this is my first ever launched flash site, so go somewhat easy on me. ta very muchly Jonathan ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [September 20, 2004, 5:57am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-flash-website/64799/2 "2004-09-20T05:57:01Z")
Good job. I like the 3-D but there is some clipping. Fix that and your good. Also work on the placement of the content alittle more. You have potential dude. Keep it up. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [September 20, 2004, 6:06am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-flash-website/64799/3 "2004-09-20T06:06:11Z")
agree with what DJ said… mostly you need to work more on the layout, use grid to organize your content, I would change and use other color for link. overall im impressed as this is your first flash… great job… like dj said, you got potential 😃 keep it up ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [September 20, 2004, 6:08am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-flash-website/64799/4 "2004-09-20T06:08:29Z")
thanks, guys, what do you mean by clipping? will take your responses into account. 🙂 always good to get other’s opinions… when you’ve seen it so many times it gets a bit sickening… 🙂 the layout was i guess a little rushed. I wasnt given really much at all to work with… (slack client) Ill hopefully have a good look at it when ive recovered from it all! 🙂 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [September 20, 2004, 7:46am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-flash-website/64799/5 "2004-09-20T07:46:13Z")
looks a lot better! I does lag tho… but I’m on an old dusty mac at school, I think it’ll run fine on the home pc. 🙂 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [September 21, 2004, 6:35am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-flash-website/64799/6 "2004-09-21T06:35:41Z")
I think the content looks a bit all over the place because Ive tried to avoid the bits that stick up from the screen - the grey bits. I might just place the content over the top of this, or do the painstaking job of removing them. the lag could be caused as its running at 15fps… i remember seeing something about what mac interprets as apposed to what pc’s do… i could bump it up to 21. again thanks heaps guys for taking the time out to check on it! JD