# My first pixel art .. criticism appreciated!

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**Category:** design\
**Created:** [March 27, 2003, 4:35am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-pixel-art-criticism-appreciated/16657 "2003-03-27T04:35:08Z")\
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**Author:** ![Sylint](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/ed8c4c/32.png) [@Sylint](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Sylint)\
**Post date:** [March 27, 2003, 4:35am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-pixel-art-criticism-appreciated/16657/1 "2003-03-27T04:35:08Z")

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Hi all, this is my first piece of pixel art… please give any constructive comments/criticisms/tips that I could do to make this piece more interesting or better hehe. Hope you all like it! 😉

Here it is:  
[http://www.geocities.com/voodoo3blt/pixelart/pixelart.htm](http://www.geocities.com/voodoo3blt/pixelart/pixelart.htm)

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [March 27, 2003, 4:46am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-pixel-art-criticism-appreciated/16657/2 "2003-03-27T04:46:12Z")

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**[SIZE=15]WELCOME SYLINT[/SIZE]  
© electrongeek**

thats pretty good for your first time! Better than me!

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [March 27, 2003, 4:48am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-pixel-art-criticism-appreciated/16657/3 "2003-03-27T04:48:46Z")

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Wow hehe thanks for the big welcome! =). And thanks hehe I think it could use a little more detail though…

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [March 27, 2003, 4:58am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-pixel-art-criticism-appreciated/16657/4 "2003-03-27T04:58:33Z")

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Well, right off the bat I noticed excellent shading and detail. Kinda tough to tell what is going on with those yellow dots though…

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [March 27, 2003, 12:13pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-pixel-art-criticism-appreciated/16657/5 "2003-03-27T12:13:29Z")

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Ye that is great for a first effort, very nice shading. But if you want some critisism, i don’t think the feet look quite rite, kinda looks like it on tip toes, dunno mite just be me, and i agree with morse about the yellows bits

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [March 27, 2003, 7:17pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-pixel-art-criticism-appreciated/16657/6 "2003-03-27T19:17:26Z")

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Yes, very good. I’d change the perspective a bit for more drama, but it is pixel art after all. 🙂

–EP

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [March 28, 2003, 12:23am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-pixel-art-criticism-appreciated/16657/7 "2003-03-28T00:23:13Z")

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over all very very good for yer first piece. i mean it could use a pit detail and it is a little small but thats it! i like it :A+: and welcome!

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [March 28, 2003, 9:39pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-pixel-art-criticism-appreciated/16657/8 "2003-03-28T21:39:57Z")

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i like it a lot, post more when you get 'em!

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [March 29, 2003, 3:09pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-pixel-art-criticism-appreciated/16657/9 "2003-03-29T15:09:51Z")

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Its good but its not REALLY pixel art,  
most pixel art is isometric  
e.g.

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [March 29, 2003, 3:10pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-pixel-art-criticism-appreciated/16657/10 "2003-03-29T15:10:57Z")

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but yeah  
otherwise its really good