# My first site

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-site/96382>\
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**Created:** [December 8, 2003, 9:35pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-site/96382 "2003-12-08T21:35:35Z")\
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**Author:** ![Shaolin23](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/8c91f0/32.png) [@Shaolin23](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Shaolin23)\
**Post date:** [December 8, 2003, 9:35pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-site/96382/1 "2003-12-08T21:35:35Z")

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Hello all,

I’m on the verge of completing my first site, which has been done pro-bono for a local youth shelter…

Please post your comments / criticism, as it would be greatly appreciated.

P.s. - I know about the loader bar percentage data difference.🙂

[Touchstone Youth Centre](http://www.openweb.ca/~oc1320/)

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [December 10, 2003, 1:02am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-first-site/96382/2 "2003-12-10T01:02:47Z")

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As said above, I dont understand why you did it in flash, Would probably look better in HTML and load faster. Also dont like the colour and the white stripe through it hurts my eyes after a while :-\ and i think it would look better if the movie filled the whole page insted of having the white border around it.

But its clean, simple and easy to read.

But not really my style.