iâve done some changes on my site and want to know how it works on others comps in net an what other people think about the site. Can you help me? just look at www.rewko.wz.cz and write some critiues over hereâŚ
its not really my style, so iâll pass judgement.
well, iâll give you a couple of suggestions:
- your fonts are very inconsistent. so iâd stick to a couple fonts.
- your dividers in your menu are basically the symantec logo, so iâd change that
i think it just needs to be cleaned up a little. definitely start with the fonts.
Then why bother replying?
Anyway, yoursite
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Nav font⌠ugly, and unprofessional
YingYang bullet? Doesnât make sense
Pic fonts, are weak.
Even though it shows what the current page is at the bottom, use some kind of indicator on the Nav that shows what page youâre on.
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Layout is basic but decent
Pictures look good
Basically change your fonts and this would be about 100x better. Also IMO that red is odd looking, but thatâs personal preference.
and what about now?
like has been said before, i dont know about that red. i like how you have each picture pop up in a nice little pop-up window. though those can get annoying sometimes, i think it works here. you still have a large variety of fonts going on, though. i think you need to use maybe 2 or 3 fonts and stick with them. font use is one of the major things that makes a user comfortable with a site. using a lot of fonts, in my opinion, is not a good idea. the rollovers on your menu items is simple but this isnât the type of style that needs anything spectacular. the ability to sort them by size, name, date, etc. is a nice touch. really the only complaint i have about the site is the big white space you have at your âsplashâ page. white space is good but itâs a little much in my opinion.
overall, i think you did really well.
sam
Hi Rewko howâs it going.
Looks good so far, but I guess you have a script problem there, because I couldnât go back in.
I like those photos though, the compositions are great, they were well taken! Nice one.
ok based on what I remember⌠if I can give you some feedback:
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Color.
I know that you try to make the site looks bright, but yellow and red [is that maroon?] just donât get along really well. -
Thumbnails
Usually for thumbs, people use the same size, so for example 150x150 pxl for each of them. That means more work I know, but it will make you site looks more organized than before. -
Font
Like it has been mentioned, probably itâs better if you stick with one / two fonts only. Itâs not about some weird rules, but it helps to organize the site. -
Transparency
I barely could see the bottom line âarrange by, current page, date etcâ maybe you can play with the transparency a bit, make it more legible?
I think thats it Rewko
oh one more suggestion, for the menus on top, maybe you can use this sign " | " instead of white square, my first impression was I thought it was that type of font that web browser couldnât read.
good luck,
v
note:
Guys⌠how about some CONSTRUCTIVE feedback you could use these words ânot fit, not matchâ instead of âuglyâ itâs like a slap in the faceâŚ
CONSTRUCTIVE?
anyway, rewko, iâd consider working on the fonts more. try dynamic text, not static.
oops my bad
Heh, sorry man I tell it how it is and I would expect the same from everyone else. I donât sugar coat things and I tact definately isnât in my Kirupa dictionary.
I have done changes on this site :
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Thumbnails are now the same size.
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The background color is gray (350z I donât know what kind of red it was I dont thinnk i had a nameâŚ)
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I use only 2 fonts
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I have to do something about the splash screen. I need some help, Iâd like to locate there a shorcut to macromedia flash player. I have seen on couple of sites something what looked like done originally by macromedia for this purpose. Does anybody know somethig about it?
How does it look and work now?
Yea the grey looks better IMO. still a little bland but better.
Iâm still not feelin the bullets in your nav. And your font usage is better too, although Iâm still squemish about the menu chicken scratch font.
You can get the button from http://www.macromedia.com/downloads/ look on the left right hand side⌠d/l the gif and then just copy that address link.
i think it looks a lot better. the best improvement was making all the thumbnails the same size. good job.
yet, i still think itâs sort of disorganized. i think thatâs mostly because you have some text in every corner of the site. maybe try just highliting the section youâre in and the page youâre on rather than having 2 corners taken up by that text.
itâs looking better though.
those glory words sound good. But i still have what to do, dont I?
Is it better now. I tried to clean it up a littleâŚ
simplistik
thx for link
some nice images I would instead of ââcome inââ make a ââenterââ button on splashâŚmaybe a litlle advanced preloader in the between those 3 sections would be nice!
peace
iâll be think about thatâŚ
That âDownload Flash Playerâ image you have on your first page looks AWFULLY familiar to meâŚ
âŚthatâs all Iâm saying. Actually thatâs not all. Bro, at least change the color of my image or something. Put some sort of effort into it if youâre going to lift it.
Sorry, I didnt realise that i am stealing it from u. I am just changing it for macromedia âDownload Flash Playerâ.