# My second ever 'grunge' piece

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-second-ever-grunge-piece/116191>\
**Category:** Uncategorized\
**Created:** [July 15, 2004, 12:05pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-second-ever-grunge-piece/116191 "2004-07-15T12:05:48Z")\
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**Author:** ![ya3](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/y/e95f7d/32.png) [@ya3](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/ya3)\
**Post date:** [July 15, 2004, 12:05pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-second-ever-grunge-piece/116191/1 "2004-07-15T12:05:48Z")

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hey everyone

i’ve just started experimenting with the grungy style. Comments and crits appreciated 😃  
[http://www.deviantart.com/view/8913434/](http://www.deviantart.com/view/8913434/)

thanks 🐇

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [July 21, 2004, 9:31pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-second-ever-grunge-piece/116191/2 "2004-07-21T21:31:02Z")

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I really like this image, but I would consider creating more contrast between the colours to really bring it out more. The micro text in the center doesn’t work, i think it needs to be given the same treatment as the other text. Also try a differnet font for your main writing.