# My second Line Art Effort
**URL:** https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-second-line-art-effort/15319
**Category:** design
**Created:** [March 12, 2003, 11:58pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-second-line-art-effort/15319 "2003-03-12T23:58:28Z")
**Posts on this page:** 4
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### Author:  [@Lunar\_4u](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Lunar_4u)
#### Post date: [March 12, 2003, 11:58pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-second-line-art-effort/15319/1 "2003-03-12T23:58:28Z")
Hiya, here’s my second effort so far, it my own not a trace so it aint as good :S. And i dont have a scanner so i had to just draw it as i felt like it lol. So tell me what ya think, and i know the eyes r big!!! thats what i wanted lol
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [March 13, 2003, 8:54am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-second-line-art-effort/15319/2 "2003-03-13T08:54:44Z")
i’m not too good with figure drawing, but something looks a bit wrong, i think maybe her shoulders are too broad.
other than that, i reckon it looks good, especially for a second effort, and without a scanner or anything
Stuart
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [March 13, 2003, 9:55am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-second-line-art-effort/15319/3 "2003-03-13T09:55:35Z")
Ye i been thinking sommer ain’t right but couldn’t put my finger on it hmmmm. But it ian’t 100% finished yet i wanted some opinions so i could edit it futher :D, cheers for the feedback
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [March 13, 2003, 10:12am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-second-line-art-effort/15319/4 "2003-03-13T10:12:38Z")
Not bad, but I think her hands are a bit too small and the way she’s standing looks like she needs to use the restroom.
It’s still good for your 2nd effort though. =)