# My site please check

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-site-please-check/18749>\
**Category:** design\
**Created:** [April 20, 2003, 3:48pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-site-please-check/18749 "2003-04-20T15:48:51Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 4\
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**Author:** ![cturner](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/c/f04885/32.png) [@cturner](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/cturner)\
**Post date:** [April 20, 2003, 3:48pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-site-please-check/18749/1 "2003-04-20T15:48:51Z")

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I would like some feedback on my website please.  
[http://users.tpg.com.au/ecamille](http://users.tpg.com.au/ecamille)

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [April 20, 2003, 4:28pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-site-please-check/18749/2 "2003-04-20T16:28:32Z")

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It’s a bit un flash

there aren’t a lot of effect’s in it, Why do you use flash for it, there is no animation in it

This may be hard, but I think it is the truth…

Peace

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [April 20, 2003, 4:51pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-site-please-check/18749/3 "2003-04-20T16:51:21Z")

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This site looks like it was thrown together in an hour…

You should preplan your work and work on creating a better layout that remains consistent.

Try using another color scheme as well, yellow text on a red background is an eye strain for your visitors.

Take out a couple sheets of paper and plan your site out, make some quick sketches and work from there. Good luck. =)

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [April 20, 2003, 10:02pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-site-please-check/18749/4 "2003-04-20T22:02:42Z")

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you need some preloaders, it took forever to load the folio. Maybe some transitions. But I think it’s fine. And a good use of flash. Small file size, precise placement of assets. I applaud the restraint on the animation (ick, remember all that flying and spinning text!).

but I think it’s okay, just keep refining . . .