# My whole work! check it out!

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-whole-work-check-it-out/28766>\
**Category:** design\
**Created:** [August 18, 2003, 8:24am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-whole-work-check-it-out/28766 "2003-08-18T08:24:34Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 4\
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**Author:** ![j03y](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/j/b9bd4f/32.png) [@j03y](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/j03y)\
**Post date:** [August 18, 2003, 8:24am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-whole-work-check-it-out/28766/1 "2003-08-18T08:24:34Z")

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hey guys… gimme some comments, suggestions, anything good, bad, violent…

[http://www.e-recruitmentsolutions.ph](http://www.e-recruitmentsolutions.ph) \<— recruitment site with intro

[http://202.164.191.178/swf/aboutus/](http://202.164.191.178/swf/aboutus/) \<— flash presentation

first, hmm gimme advice… does it really to have an intro for an commercial site… cuz… i think… it threw away audience??? right??

second… does my work are OK…??

third… your comments, i need it badly… im doing im massive revisions on my work… pls help me to improve my work… tnx guyS!!

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [August 18, 2003, 4:18pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-whole-work-check-it-out/28766/2 "2003-08-18T16:18:45Z")

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I sew it the other day…[http://www.e-recruitmentsolutions.ph](http://www.e-recruitmentsolutions.ph)  
intro was ok not great…dont really think u need a intro here, cause the site looks ok without it…like a small portal that looks coorporate, so its ok u dont need a intro for. It stands good alone.

[http://202.164.191.178/swf/aboutus/](http://202.164.191.178/swf/aboutus/) its also good, pop it out on the center of the page not the corner…intro is dinamic and I like it, I like the fact that everything opens from the intro, I didnt like that guitar sound once u just logged in. Services and work doesnt work…profile its ok 🙂 I like the menu idea but I really dont like msn style idea…cause well its just not originall. I love the small icons on how we do it…scalability - reliability - security etc, u better of putting those as a menu then msn ones.

its missing the polishing

peace

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [August 18, 2003, 4:19pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-whole-work-check-it-out/28766/3 "2003-08-18T16:19:43Z")

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the first one is alright but i couldn’t see anything on second one.  
(maybe it’s beacuse i don’t have flash on this computer)

PS. I like the graphics

ICED T:tie:

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [August 21, 2003, 1:06am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/my-whole-work-check-it-out/28766/4 "2003-08-21T01:06:44Z")

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LOL!!! it look like MSN… i have no idea about that… heheheh gosh… shame of me… wel. i have to revise my icons and the design on the how we do it section… well tnx people for your comment… also to mr.mass. \<-- i saw ur site… its cool… and also… can u check out guys my designa and layout on the FOLIO section of my work. tnx… kirupa gang!!! i hope this forum will continue forever!!! 😃 godbless!!

[http://202.164.191.178/swf/aboutus/](http://202.164.191.178/swf/aboutus/)

TNX godblees again!

MABUHAY kirupa!!

mabuhay \<---- longlive!!