# Need crit for ill

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/need-crit-for-ill/190064>\
**Category:** design\
**Created:** [June 8, 2006, 11:18am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/need-crit-for-ill/190064 "2006-06-08T11:18:22Z")\
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**Author:** ![mikken](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/m/e5b9ba/32.png) [@mikken](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/mikken)\
**Post date:** [June 8, 2006, 11:18am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/need-crit-for-ill/190064/1 "2006-06-08T11:18:22Z")

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Hi folks!

Thought i’d throw [\>\>this\<\<](http://amp-up.no/frank2.jpg) to the hounds.

I know i know i know i know, sunburst is Over Used (Hey, even the japanese are using it!), and this isn’t breaking new ground in graphic design. But; does it work?

It isn’t the most serious project I’ve ever done, it’s actually part of a birthday present and the elements are central to the birthday-ee’s personality.

Gimme your thoughts!

Edit: Cure for blindness 😉